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That Unfeeling Feeling

Abyss of emotions amiss nebulous floating numb sensory deprivation tank of a blank mind Is this real? I feel so surreal foreign and strange, too much change- unfamiliar feelings that send me reeling Unfeeling blindly reaching out wandering wondering how to make it through without knowing how I feel...

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M. L. Kiser

Date: 8/5/2019 9:11:00 PM

It is a bizarre feeling; I hate it, feel so lost in that grey area of life.

Rhona Mcferran
Date: 8/6/2019 12:51:00 PM

Exactly!! Thanks for understanding, my friend! ;)

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 8/5/2019 5:56:00 AM

"tank of a blank mind" - this captured me and grabbed me, Soul Sister. I have been there!

Rhona Mcferran
Date: 8/6/2019 12:51:00 PM

Thanks, I knew you could relate! ;)

Michelle Faulkner

Date: 8/3/2019 5:19:00 PM

Ah yes - that unsettled settling, that knowing unknown (I guess you inspired me) - Simply amazing, Rhona!

Rhona Mcferran
Date: 8/3/2019 9:43:00 PM

Thank you so much!! ;)

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 8/3/2019 9:40:00 AM

Yes I have felt this way. I must say I prefer “That Lovin Feelin”. You expressed this well. When we are depressed the mind shuts down our emotions. Is kinda like becoming a zombie of sorts.

Rhona Mcferran
Date: 8/3/2019 9:42:00 PM

Thank you, my friend! Yes, it is a zombie-ish state of being... I'm always so relieved when things get back to 'normal' (...I use the term loosely)! ;)

Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib

Date: 8/2/2019 12:36:00 PM

Potent poem! <3

Rhona Mcferran
Date: 8/2/2019 9:07:00 PM

Thank you, Mo! ;) <3

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/2/2019 6:13:00 AM

This is great stuff. So emotive. I really feel this way a lot. It's a long story. Anyway. U made some lovely comments to me lately. Thanx so much.

Rhona Mcferran
Date: 8/2/2019 9:06:00 PM

It's sort of nice to know I'm not alone in this... but I'm so sorry you have to go through it, too! *hugs* You're most welcome for the comments- they're well deserved! ;) (I only wish I had the time & energy to be here more often!!)

Frances Byrne

Date: 8/2/2019 5:51:00 AM

Hi Rhona, Wow, that is brilliant. Frances

Rhona Mcferran
Date: 8/2/2019 9:02:00 PM

Aawww, thank you so much! ;)