That Summer Night

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That summer night we raised our tent
   beneath the moonlit, star-filled sky.
A day of hiking we had spent
   along Australian trails nearby.

All settled in, did not take long-
   exhausted from the rugged hike,
to fall asleep with nature's song
   of creature sounds soft and ghost-like.

Before too long- asleep I sensed
   my love's strong arm, reach over me.
I cuddled closer, leaned against-
   but soon was pressured horribly.

Around my neck it strangled tight
   I could not make a single sound;
such inner fear and total fright
   when 'round my torso it then wound.

My arms were trapped, what can I do?
   How is this happening and why?
I can't believe my life is through
   beneath this moonlit, star-filled sky.

At once I felt strong hands tug hard
   but could not free the tightened grip.
My life was ebbing, full breaths barred,
   and into death, I'd surely slip.

My husband screamed, "I've got my knife,"
   as tighter curled its hold on me.
"Oh, God, please save my darling wife-
   from this huge monster, set her free!"

The python snake much tighter grasped-
   above, a knife all set to fall!
At once I sat right up and gasped!
   "Thank God! A nightmare! That was all!"


September 14, 2016

Premier Contest: The Snake Charmer
Sponsor:  Kai Michael Neumann

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016



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Date: 2/8/2022 9:14:00 AM
Thank God that was all! What a nightmare! And to think they're often kept as pets!! Your poem is great!
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Date: 4/17/2018 11:09:00 PM
Quite the nightmare, Sandra. Congrats on your well deserved win.
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Date: 1/27/2018 4:55:00 PM
Suspense to the INTH degree! I'm new and want to follow you congrats!bbn
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Date: 1/26/2018 10:31:00 AM
Captivating narrative, Sandra--CONGRATS! Janice
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Date: 9/16/2016 1:45:00 PM
Well done, that WAS scary! Good luck on the contest, Sandra. Agnes
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Date: 9/15/2016 9:27:00 PM
That is scary Sandra...well penned...
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Date: 9/15/2016 4:11:00 PM
This is by far THE BEST poem I've read so far on this site. You have captured the very essence of life here. It was indeed a pleasure. You certainly have a new fan.. Jenni_K
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Sandra Haight
Date: 9/15/2016 8:19:00 PM
I am honored and flattered, Jenni...thank you so much for your kind comments and support. Hugs, Sandra
Date: 9/15/2016 4:01:00 PM
Wow...you had me in suspense all through this awesome write which began so peaceful and calm... Well done.
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Sandra Haight
Date: 9/15/2016 8:19:00 PM
Thank you, Jenni! Glad it worked as far as being suspenseful to the surprise ending! Hugs, Sandra
Date: 9/15/2016 3:10:00 PM
A superb write and entry for the contest Sandra! ; ) 7
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Sandra Haight
Date: 9/15/2016 8:18:00 PM
Thanks, Connie...I do not do scary much, but it was fun once I got started! Hugs, Sandra
Date: 9/14/2016 2:24:00 PM
Mrs Sandra, you had my heart racing to get to the end. Obviously, I knew you survived but it was very tense. Great suspense. I'll have to make it a point to stay away from you and your house around Halloween. I don't do scary! Great write:):)
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Sandra Haight
Date: 9/15/2016 8:17:00 PM
I am pleased you thought this suspenseful, Daniel! It was more difficult for me to come up with a theme, but my imaginative muse saved me. Thanks for the supportive comments! Sandra
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