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That Summer Night


That summer night we raised our tent
   beneath the moonlit, star-filled sky.
A day of hiking we had spent
   along Australian trails nearby.

All settled in, did not take long-
   exhausted from the rugged hike,
to fall asleep with nature's song
   of creature sounds soft and ghost-like.

Before too long- asleep I sensed
   my love's strong arm, reach over me.
I cuddled closer, leaned against-
   but soon was pressured horribly.

Around my neck it strangled tight
   I could not make a single sound;
such inner fear and total fright
   when 'round my torso it then wound.

My arms were trapped, what can I do?
   How is this happening and why?
I can't believe my life is through
   beneath this moonlit, star-filled sky.

At once I felt strong hands tug hard
   but could not free the tightened grip.
My life was ebbing, full breaths barred,
   and into death, I'd surely slip.

My husband screamed, "I've got my knife,"
   as tighter curled its hold on me.
"Oh, God, please save my darling wife-
   from this huge monster, set her free!"

The python snake much tighter grasped-
   above, a knife all set to fall!
At once I sat right up and gasped!
   "Thank God! A nightmare! That was all!"


September 14, 2016

Premier Contest: The Snake Charmer
Sponsor:  Kai Michael Neumann
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Peck Avatar
February 8, 2022 at 9:14 AM
Thank God that was all! What a nightmare! And to think they're often kept as pets!! Your poem is great!
Gauthier Avatar
April 17, 2018 at 11:09 PM
Quite the nightmare, Sandra. Congrats on your well deserved win.
Barry-Nishanian Avatar
January 27, 2018 at 4:55 PM
Suspense to the INTH degree! I'm new and want to follow you congrats!bbn
Canerdy Avatar
January 26, 2018 at 10:31 AM
Captivating narrative, Sandra--CONGRATS! Janice
Krampe Avatar
September 16, 2016 at 1:45 PM
Well done, that WAS scary! Good luck on the contest, Sandra. Agnes
May Avatar
September 15, 2016 at 9:27 PM
That is scary Sandra...well penned...
Kalicharan Avatar
September 15, 2016 at 4:11 PM
This is by far THE BEST poem I've read so far on this site. You have captured the very essence of life here. It was indeed a pleasure. You certainly have a new fan.. Jenni_K
Haight Avatar
September 15, 2016 at 8:19 PM
I am honored and flattered, Jenni...thank you so much for your kind comments and support. Hugs, Sandra
Kalicharan Avatar
September 15, 2016 at 4:01 PM
Wow...you had me in suspense all through this awesome write which began so peaceful and calm... Well done.
Haight Avatar
September 15, 2016 at 8:19 PM
Thank you, Jenni! Glad it worked as far as being suspenseful to the surprise ending! Hugs, Sandra
Marcum Wong Avatar
September 15, 2016 at 3:10 PM
A superb write and entry for the contest Sandra! ; ) 7
Haight Avatar
September 15, 2016 at 8:18 PM
Thanks, Connie...I do not do scary much, but it was fun once I got started! Hugs, Sandra
Turner Avatar
September 14, 2016 at 2:24 PM
Mrs Sandra, you had my heart racing to get to the end. Obviously, I knew you survived but it was very tense. Great suspense. I'll have to make it a point to stay away from you and your house around Halloween. I don't do scary! Great write:):)
Haight Avatar
September 15, 2016 at 8:17 PM
I am pleased you thought this suspenseful, Daniel! It was more difficult for me to come up with a theme, but my imaginative muse saved me. Thanks for the supportive comments! Sandra
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