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That Sinking Feeling

White foam on rough seas The boat was pitched to and fro Then capsized with ease

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Kim Rodrigues

Date: 4/8/2024 6:24:00 PM

Excellent!

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/9/2024 4:27:00 AM

My hubby likewise experienced a hurricane at sea on a research vessel. By the way I was in the Navy too! Thank you for your service! I was in, in the 1980’s.

Randy Freie
Date: 4/8/2024 6:33:00 PM

Thanks Kim, I was having flashbacks when I was in the Navy. We hit a storm in the Mediterranean and came close to capsizing ourselves. Luckily the ballast held, but I still consider it the wildest ride I ever took. Rollercoasters are like kiddie cars compared to the ride you can take out at sea. I appreciate your feedback baby sister.