That Silly Grin a Pirouette Poem

You left me standing there
With that silly face grin
Once again you out-shined
A sunny blue sky day
Laughing as you galloped.

Laughing as you galloped,
I watched you disappear.
What your love did to me,
Left with that silly grin
My pain, cutting deeply.

Cynthia
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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August 13, 2012 at 12:32 AM
In your third line, "out-shinned" should be correctly spelled "outshined". You describe his grin as being something very damaging. Forget him and don't notice his grin.
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