That Pause between Summer and Autumn

Contest: Seasons now and after
Sponsor: Nette Onclaud
Date: 12.08.2025


Feel that pause between Summer and Autumn,
When the universe takes a relieved breath,
Before pulling the leaves to the bottom,
Where they fall to their silent crushing death;

Hear that sigh between Summer and Autumn,
Pregnant with the restless rustle of trees,
All good and ready for what God taught 'em,
Whispering soft the secrets of the breeze;

That break between Summer and Autumn's cool,
Change's needed, so's the time to just lie ~
The in-between time to face new shift's rule,
When Nature grooms itself to dye and die.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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Delaney Avatar
August 22, 2025 at 6:21 AM
Congratulation on your descriptive write. I felt the season's anticipation of change.
Buhagiar Avatar
August 18, 2025 at 2:07 AM
Congratulations on your win! Your poem really delights.
Alhemaidy Avatar
August 17, 2025 at 1:03 PM
Congratulations on your win!
Goldsmith Avatar
August 15, 2025 at 9:32 AM
Back with Congratulations on your wonderful win. I loved reading your wonderful write again. Have a blessed day with your win............
Andresen Avatar
August 15, 2025 at 5:04 AM
- Congratulations on your win in the contest, Joanna :) - Enjoy reading it for the second time :) - Have a lovely weekend :) - hugs
Fleming Avatar
August 12, 2025 at 3:27 PM
Enjoyed the read, Joanna! :) john
Andresen Avatar
August 12, 2025 at 12:44 PM
- A little melancholic when summer is over ... but, autumn is beautiful ... enjoying your poem, Joanna :) - Best wishes :) - hugs
Goldsmith Avatar
August 12, 2025 at 11:50 AM
What a lovely write you have here. Summer has been hot (110-125) and dry. "Good Luck" We both did this contest. Have a lovely/blessed day writing away...............
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