That Old Red Barn

The old red barn has fallen down,
Last vintage of my daddy's farm.

The cattle and the horses were
Sold off these many years ago.

At Mama's urging, Daddy quit
And moved into the nearest town.

Vandals burned the old house down,
Surviving barn stood on alone.

It battled wind and winter storms
Until one strong blast flattened it.

My daddy searched the scene next day
Looking for pieces of his life.

Now Daddy drives the country round,
Counting old red barns still standing.



Inspired by Rick's contest.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Horsman Avatar
October 4, 2010 at 8:50 PM
such a lot of sadness here in this wonderful poem. good luck in contest. Harry
Mehta Avatar
October 4, 2010 at 1:32 PM
Very nice memories you recollect of your that old Red Barn with joy, Joyce. Good luck
Roberts Avatar
October 4, 2010 at 11:48 AM
nice entry, much enjoyed, good luck in the contest
Esquire Avatar
October 4, 2010 at 8:54 AM
Dear "MOM" Joyce, Me thinks, I've read a Winner Perfection at its finess Congratulations YOUR Liege, ALWAYS...Harry - SOUP MAIL CALL
Gorelick Avatar
October 4, 2010 at 8:48 AM
Another winner Joyce..I love the concept for this contest..BG
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