That Night You Left

That night you left,
the rain came with a pelt—
an abyss in my heart,
a curse you placed from the start.

Hurt words, hurt heart, hurt soul—
an emotional toll
I buried deep
in hope our marriage to keep.

And with courage sparked,
I kicked you out in the dark
on a night wild with anger,
for the two of you to tangle.

And yet as soon as I did,
my heart bid
a return—
Has the lesson been learned?

The pelting turned to a cyclone warning,
heaven and earth aligning.
The whole world erupts to send me a message:
going back was not the right passage?

I woke in the morning to a daughter exclaiming,
“The cyclone was pushed back—
no longer on track.”

To a reframing of my life...
Until next time.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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Rodrigues Avatar
November 14, 2025 at 6:48 AM
Poetry is cathartic. Both men and women should be taught that marriage is not easy but it is to “the marriage” we should attend. God bless your family!
Williams Avatar
December 9, 2025 at 2:51 AM
Yes, it really is cathartic. And again—I agree. Marriage is not easy, but must be worked on (we're still together by the way). Thank you for your comment.
Mcconnell Avatar
November 9, 2025 at 12:08 PM
Welcome to PS Roslyn, this is a nice piece with good imagery and expression with insightful line of thought too. Take care, blessings from Scotland,Gordon
Williams Avatar
November 9, 2025 at 12:52 PM
Thank you. I'm very encouraged by your comment.
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