That Mouse

I've got a rash on my hand and wrist
Right where my little mouse doth sit
Does anyone know where I can find
A hypoallergenic mouse of any kind


(Just Joshing..I need something
funny to think about..)
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Dietrich Avatar
January 3, 2012 at 10:55 PM
Haha. I just came way back here and found this cute little mouse poem!! HOpe you are doing well, Sara.
Foster Avatar
November 26, 2010 at 5:58 PM
Sara, this write gave me a much needed chuckle indeed my friend ;-) Thank you for sharing the read. Many Blessings, Always, Adell
Lusha Avatar
November 7, 2010 at 5:44 AM
Hi Sara what a cute little poem, just what the doctor ordered a chuckle and a smile..now I'm glad I'm back to the soup...Alie
Peranteau Avatar
November 7, 2010 at 5:11 AM
Funny indeed dear poet ! But Noah and I are allergic to dander ! *smiles* We can relate ! much love, james
Babcock Avatar
November 6, 2010 at 8:19 AM
They say laughter is good medicine. We all need a chuckle and some days more than others. I am working another job for the next two weeks full time so will see how the legs and back handle that. I did a blog to see if anyone else had scoliosis so have a look at the comments. Luv Phyl
Henderson Avatar
November 5, 2010 at 10:07 PM
I don't know Sara I think they are all allergic to mouse traps. Charles
Falotico Avatar
November 5, 2010 at 2:50 PM
Made me smile Sara... we all need a smile at times...Love Michael
Del Fierro Avatar
November 5, 2010 at 10:48 AM
nice simile....of your puter mouse :)....sometimes,i do the same thing,which i call "writing exercises",even if they don't make sense,just need to stay tuned....take care sara...peace , jay
Culverhouse Avatar
November 5, 2010 at 8:12 AM
maybe it has fleas and you need to deflea it. hehehehaw--suey side--eating bacon!
Mehta Avatar
November 5, 2010 at 8:04 AM
I enjoyed your nice write on That mouse, Sara
Devonshire Avatar
November 5, 2010 at 7:39 AM
VERY cute, Sara!! I'm glad you're just joshing with us. It seems you have enough on your plate without having to search for a "hypoallergenic mouse." LOL Love, Carolyn
Roberts Avatar
November 5, 2010 at 7:37 AM
very cute little poem
Sweetheart Avatar
November 5, 2010 at 7:31 AM
Well this fits the bill Sara.. cute and funny too.. don't think they sell those yet.. but keep positive..anything is possible luv.. happy weekend...
M V Avatar
November 5, 2010 at 6:01 AM
your thoughts on mouse i enjoyed,sara.fabiyas
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