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that Monet moment


pink marshmallow clouds tinted by the setting sun artist mixes oils 11/13/19

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Date: 12/19/2019 11:51:00 AM
A piece to live for. Amazing imagery!
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Date: 12/14/2019 9:17:00 AM
Hi Jan: Simple but beautiful!
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Date: 12/13/2019 3:33:00 PM
Jan: Stopped by today for a little "Jan Allison Fix" before the holidays. What a wonderful one to start with. Thanks for sharing with all of us on the Soup. oldbuck
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Date: 12/6/2019 10:26:00 PM
Love this x
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Date: 12/3/2019 5:53:00 PM
Your title caught my attention, and the poem rewarded my curiosity. Very nice, Jan! That Monet moment is also the poet's palette! ;-)
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Date: 11/30/2019 5:44:00 PM
I see colors!! Lovely Jan. Has a soft touch.
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Date: 11/15/2019 6:14:00 PM
Sweet! Love your beautiful poems!
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 11/16/2019 9:19:00 AM
aww you are too kind Natalyn, I usually write silly poems to make people smile but this is one of my better efforts lol:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 11/15/2019 7:31:00 AM
Very nicely penned haiku, Jan. It leave a soft serene image in my mind. Hugs, John
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Date: 11/16/2019 9:19:00 AM
thanks John, we have had some blissful sunrises and sunsets recently:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 11/14/2019 6:08:00 PM
Living proof that even the most heavenly artist has critics! Aloha! Rico
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Date: 11/14/2019 7:03:00 PM
thanks Rico:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 11/14/2019 10:37:00 AM
Love the way the title works with this haiku! It's made a huge 'impression' on me. (LOL). THANKS! Cheers, Gershon
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Date: 11/14/2019 7:04:00 PM
lol GW I couldn't resist the title, thanks for commenting on that:-) hugs Jan x
Date: 11/14/2019 7:04:00 AM
Lovely, Jan. I love it. Bless you dear friend, Gina
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Date: 11/14/2019 7:04:00 PM
thanks Regina:-) hugs Jan x
Date: 11/14/2019 3:39:00 AM
Wonderful haiku. I love Monet. Hugs xo
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 11/14/2019 4:52:00 AM
Thanks Victor am so pleased with all the postive comments I've had:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 11/13/2019 11:29:00 PM
Excellent and wonderful haiku. Thoroughly enjoyed
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Date: 11/14/2019 4:54:00 AM
thanks ravi:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 11/13/2019 7:54:00 PM
Great Jan, I need to get back to our Art Institute and see all his great works...https://www.artic.edu/artists/35809/claude-monet
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Date: 11/14/2019 5:12:00 AM
thanks so much TS I would love to see his artwork for real one day:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 11/13/2019 5:49:00 PM
Being an artist, I noticed the way your third line blended with the other lines as a painter would blend jeweled toned oils. In your first two lines, my imagination envisioned the warmth of the setting sun toasting those marshmallow clouds. At dusk, the sun really does paint the clouds in an aura of colors. Well written, Jan.
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Date: 11/13/2019 6:44:00 PM
aww thanks Lin I am delighted you can see this through the eyes of an artist and wonderful poet:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 11/13/2019 4:40:00 PM
A new "Fav"; beautifully painted with words.
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Date: 11/13/2019 6:47:00 PM
Thanks so much especially for the fave ML:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 11/13/2019 3:35:00 PM
Delightful, Jan. Gotta FAVE this one.
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Date: 11/13/2019 6:48:00 PM
I surprise myself sometimes Line, thanks for your comment and especially making it a fave:-) its one of my fave poems this month:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 11/13/2019 3:25:00 PM
You have captured the process of artistic creation in a few words. Well done! Peace & Love Matthew Anish
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Date: 11/13/2019 7:10:00 PM
thanks Matthew:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 11/13/2019 3:16:00 PM
Wonderful piece Jan! Thoroughly enjoyed :), xomo!
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Date: 11/13/2019 7:10:00 PM
Ohh I like wonderful piece Mo:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 11/13/2019 1:28:00 PM
- No painting is more beautiful, Jan ... you are an amazing artist :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 11/13/2019 7:11:00 PM
aww thanks Anne-Lise you are so sweet:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 11/13/2019 1:09:00 PM
wonderful poem Jan. I could picture the canvas as the painter lifts his brush, and starts painting his masterpiece. He looks off to his left and sitting is his beautiful wife. and in that canvas starts the outline of her, his masterpiece. Thanks for sharing this
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 11/13/2019 7:13:00 PM
Thanks Gregory I'd never even heard of haiku until joined soup!:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 11/13/2019 12:16:00 PM
Monet is by far my favorite painter/artist. I could and have stood before his paintings and stare for what seems hours. His brushstrokes, the way little dabs of paint created such amazing scenes just floors me. To have that talent...wow, I wish. Really nicely done Jan. You have captured his spirit wonderfully in this Haiku.
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 11/13/2019 7:14:00 PM
I have no creative talent so am stunned I even write poetry!:-) hugs Jan xx