That Look

your seductive eyes spherical - unblinking enticement heals me














Monoku composed: February 26, 2021
Without Saying I Love You Poetry Contest
Sponsor: JCB Brul
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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Gauthier Avatar
March 20, 2021 at 7:11 AM
Congrats on your top win, Brian ~
Sambourne Avatar
March 20, 2021 at 7:15 AM
Thank you for the acknowledgement. Best wishes, Brian
Mitra Avatar
March 4, 2021 at 5:00 PM
The Eyes talk indeed...Congrats on your winning write Brian :)
Sambourne Avatar
March 4, 2021 at 6:05 PM
Very thoughtful of you to leave gracious words, Carol. Be well + safe. Best wishes, Brian
Kauffman Avatar
March 4, 2021 at 9:21 AM
So lovely Brian. I really like the healing power of love highlighted in your monoku! Congratulations on your win!
Sambourne Avatar
March 4, 2021 at 1:28 PM
Hello Sam, Thanks so much for your encouraging words. Hope all is well with you. Good vibes sent your way, cheers Brian
Rodrigues Avatar
March 4, 2021 at 5:08 AM
Very sweet! Just the look you needed! Congratulations!
Sambourne Avatar
March 4, 2021 at 6:55 AM
Hi Kim, Kind of you to drop by. Be well. Cheers, Brian
Andresen Avatar
March 4, 2021 at 2:51 AM
- Congratulations on your win, Brian ... beautifully written :) - // Anne-Lise :)
Sambourne Avatar
March 4, 2021 at 6:58 AM
Greetings Anne-Lise, Hope all is well with you. Your positive feedback is much appreciated, all the best, Brian
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March 4, 2021 at 2:47 AM
Well said Brian, without the need for words, congratulations cheers David
Sambourne Avatar
March 4, 2021 at 6:56 AM
Hello David, My appreciation for the thumbs up. Sincere good wishes, Brian
Y. Avatar
March 3, 2021 at 9:44 PM
Hi Brian, Congratulations on your 1st place win. Have a great evening:-) Alexis
Sambourne Avatar
March 4, 2021 at 6:54 AM
Thank you Alexis. Best wishes. Brian
Raiser Avatar
March 1, 2021 at 4:02 PM
If ever there were a bright side to wearing mask it's the eyes. well done.
Sambourne Avatar
March 1, 2021 at 5:31 PM
Thank you Belden, You're right - the eyes in the mask days of covid say much.Be well. Brian
Thajudeen Avatar
February 26, 2021 at 6:05 PM
Healing the need of now a days!
Sambourne Avatar
February 26, 2021 at 7:05 PM
Yes indeed, Muhammad. The here + now of healing is life sustaining. Best wishes, Brian
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