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That Kind of Day

when i think of you and i think of nothing else No i can't stand to not be in control of my own mind When i think of you and i think of nothing else my head gets so constipated i have to empty you out and when i get that way sometimes i need a little bit of air to breathe just a little bit of air to breathe and i just might leave yea i just may not do a thing sometimes i think it's all in my head and in my mind you can't get away but i know i don't need it you, me, oh the world can see it so precious is our time mine now you couldn't hike it so i decide how to "alright it" on my own terms and i know you had to get away from me but why'd you have to be where i could see when i think of you and i think of nothing else No i can't stand to not be in control of my own mind When i think of you and i think of nothing else my head gets so constipated i have to empty you out "the things we already know"

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Date: 4/5/2011 11:33:00 AM
Interesting thoughts penned...Enjoyed reading your work this afternoon.. Sara
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Date: 4/5/2011 7:20:00 AM
Thank you for sharing your amazing poetry Jerry. I enjoyed reading it and hope to read more of it soon. May you always find the inspiration to continue with your writing endeavors. Love, Carol
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Date: 4/5/2011 4:35:00 AM
Beautiful images and nice summing up of your thoughts with my head gets so constipated I have to empty you out, Jerry
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Date: 4/5/2011 1:33:00 AM
yes love can be all-consuming..good poem..love,Deb
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Date: 4/5/2011 12:07:00 AM
Sometimes when love is in control, the mind isn't, this is a fine poem, Jerry, enjoyed the read. Harry
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