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That Is the Dream I Have

Being the lone cause, I admit fault Accepting blame for our recent past For I was the one churning atmosphere Blowing into winds dusty hot air Watching it become a tornado, Leaving you to face the storm alone Creating a vacuum that swallowed you. But the sky's blue, dread has passed Rain departed breaking dark clouds Vanquishing remnants of misty thoughts That ravaged your pristine grounds. Flooding the horizon with twilight Pouring colors on silky canvas Evening has made festive plans Inviting presence of celestial stars, And I have joined the entourage, Millions of twinkling lights above Guiding the night to brand new start As you welcome me with open arms. That is the dream I have. March 21, 2018

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Valsa George

Date: 7/4/2023 8:53:00 AM

Repentance and confession always will wash away past mistakes. Again a new dawn of hope awaits for a fresh beginning.... to be reconciled and start all over again. Beautiful poem dear Vijay.

Vladislav Raven

Date: 11/18/2018 12:30:00 PM

Hi Vijay, what a dream you have. The storm is over and you hope that love can shine again. I so enjoy spending a little time reading through your emotions. My heart can sing as your words direct. Such an excellent gem of a poem Vijay. Have a wonderful Sunday. Your friend always....Mike.

Barbara Barry-Nishanian

Date: 3/25/2018 5:43:00 PM

the one churning atmosphere".... ( I've "been in some of those hot air verbal storms.) "dread has passed".... WOW! Hope you realize what a forgiving soul you have beautifully described. bbn

Vijay Pandit
Date: 3/26/2018 7:51:00 AM

Many thanks Barbara..appreciate your kind words.

Liam Mcdaid

Date: 3/25/2018 7:41:00 AM

a dream in the end that spells happy ever after excellent pen vijay

Vijay Pandit
Date: 3/26/2018 7:51:00 AM

Thank you liam.

Akkina Downing

Date: 3/24/2018 4:49:00 PM

Beautifully written, Vijay! Surely enjoyed the read...hugs :)

Vijay Pandit
Date: 3/24/2018 6:11:00 PM

Thank you Akkina..appreciate your comments.

Laura Leiser

Date: 3/24/2018 11:02:00 AM

Your dream soars from your poetic pen in this lovely poem, Vijay! Enjoyed the read :)

Vijay Pandit
Date: 3/24/2018 3:16:00 PM

Many thanks Laura for your kind words.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 3/24/2018 8:01:00 AM

- A dream that's beautiful, Vijay :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Vijay Pandit
Date: 3/24/2018 3:15:00 PM

Thank you Anne-Lise.

Paul Callus

Date: 3/23/2018 10:27:00 AM

A very lovely dream which appears to be paving the way towards reconciliation. Regards // paul

Vijay Pandit
Date: 3/23/2018 10:59:00 AM

Thank you Paul..appreciate your comments.

Joseph May

Date: 3/23/2018 8:53:00 AM

Beautiful write Vijay...

Vijay Pandit
Date: 3/23/2018 8:59:00 AM

Thank you Joseph..appreciate the feedback.

Chuck Melugin

Date: 3/23/2018 8:19:00 AM

Vijay....Do you know what I like about your Dream?? EVERYTHING!!!

Vijay Pandit
Date: 3/23/2018 8:58:00 AM

Many thanks Chuck..appreciate your kind feedback.

Arturo Michael

Date: 3/23/2018 5:46:00 AM

A lovely dream indeed...Good imagery...A really sensitive heart in the end...All the best Vijay...

Vijay Pandit
Date: 3/23/2018 7:17:00 AM

Thank you Arturo..appreciate your supportive comments.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/22/2018 7:00:00 PM

what an enchantingly beautiful dream. Wonderful writing, vijay

Vijay Pandit
Date: 3/23/2018 7:15:00 AM

Thank you Andrea..appreciate your supportive comments.

Oliver Furlong

Date: 3/22/2018 4:47:00 PM

This is a lovely poem of atmospheric sentiment, visually enchanting. Great stuff Vijay. I especially love this: "But the sky's blue, dread has passed Rain departed breaking dark clouds Vanquishing remnants of misty thoughts That ravaged your pristine grounds."

Vijay Pandit
Date: 3/22/2018 6:38:00 PM

Thank you Oliver.. appreciate your kind feedback.

Winged Warrior

Date: 3/22/2018 4:36:00 PM

May we all have dreams like yours Vijay...positive ending my friend...stay in the light...^WW^

Vijay Pandit
Date: 3/22/2018 6:38:00 PM

Thank you WW.

Silent One

Date: 3/22/2018 9:54:00 AM

Beautiful last stanza and a great dream to have...

Vijay Pandit
Date: 3/22/2018 1:46:00 PM

Thank you Silent One.

Mike Gentile

Date: 3/22/2018 9:43:00 AM

Knowing yourself, your faults, your limits is so important and very forgivable . You so beautifully express that human characteristic here, Vijay. A lovely write !!!

Vijay Pandit
Date: 3/22/2018 9:45:00 AM

Thank you Mike..agree with the sentiments..appreciate your kind feedback.

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 3/22/2018 9:14:00 AM

Your writing decorates poetry's firmament my friend, Vijay!

Vijay Pandit
Date: 3/22/2018 9:44:00 AM

Thank you Demetrios..delighted to read your comments.

Daniel Turner

Date: 3/21/2018 9:39:00 PM

Vijay, once a person chokes down their pride and opens their mind, forgiveness comes a lot easier. I have had similar dreams but none of them ended with open arms, mine were more like nightmares. I like that the poem ends on a positive turn. Good luck1

Vijay Pandit
Date: 3/22/2018 6:38:00 AM

Many thanks Daniel....appreciate your thoughts and comments.

Janice Canerdy

Date: 3/21/2018 4:23:00 PM

Excellent, Vijay! I love the theme conveyed. Janice

Vijay Pandit
Date: 3/21/2018 6:14:00 PM

Thank you Janice..happy to read your comments.