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That Friday Feeling

At last it was my bus stop So excited that I could pop I walked home with a skip and a hop. School was out for the time being Now we’ll be seeing From school the children are freeing School for the weekend is out It is now all about People beginning their weekend route Saturday will soon come Sunday right after bringing sadness to some For Sunday is school’s eve, but not everyone will be full of glum Let’s not focus on sadness coming here I need this to be clear That I want my fridays to be full of cheer Now I will play with my pup for hours of fun But the day will not be done Without a little ice cream after hours of playing in the sun!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 4/9/2018 4:59:00 PM
Back with congrats, Emily.
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Date: 3/21/2018 7:35:00 AM
This could have been written by so many; including my friends the teachers and the principals. I like it a lot!
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Date: 3/11/2018 1:01:00 PM
- Congratulations on your winning poem, Emily :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 3/11/2018 9:31:00 AM
A nice take on the contest Emily, but you need to remember that names are not allowed on contest entries. I placed you this time, but next time it will not place and many not place in other contests.. Congratulations on your placement..
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Date: 3/5/2018 9:06:00 PM
A lighthearted and joyful poem, Emily, expressing that fantastic Friday feeling. I think you captured the spirit of Fridays beautifully and I really enjoyed the rhythm and rhymes in your fabulous poem.. Warmest wishes. ~Susan
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Date: 3/8/2018 12:53:00 PM
I second that
Date: 3/4/2018 4:05:00 PM
Love the imagery in this poem. Welcome to PoetrySoup, Emily. The more you read other poets and interact the more you will grow yourself and your poetry will become even better and better. I noticed your name was printed on top, just reminding you that if you submitted it like that in the contest, your poem would have been disqualified automatically: no names!!
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Date: 2/28/2018 8:09:00 AM
Nicely done! took me back to those days... oh how fun it was.. Welcome to the soup!
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Date: 2/27/2018 1:18:00 PM
So cute, Emily! I especially liked the first and last stanzas: Enjoy that ice cream!! (Is there any pleasure greater than watching a kid eat ice cream?). Best wishes, Gershon Wolf
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