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That Forgotten Scent

~/~THAT FORGOTTEN SCENT~/~ In the dim yellow light I saw you heading towards me With a back pack But to ask for the reserved seat besides! The modest approach The way you sat aside without a wish even to touch The way you cared each time I dozed on your shoulders Taking care of me to notice not Makes you man That hidden forgotten scent of your perfume I wish to leave me not -puvi- (12/04/2016)

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Kai Michael Neumann

Date: 8/2/2016 3:50:00 AM

A gentle man with a positive scent. Well written.

Punnia Viswan Bhatia
Date: 8/2/2016 6:54:00 AM

thank you Kai for the acknowledgement :) love and peace :x

Liam Mcdaid

Date: 5/14/2016 3:25:00 PM

Beautifully painted piece almost like the flower forgetmenots excellent pen dear friend wishing you a blessing of a weekend

Arthur Vaso

Date: 4/13/2016 11:06:00 PM

I love the way you weave your story and I loved the poem, and more importantly do you wish me to mail you my backpack? :)

Punnia Viswan Bhatia
Date: 4/14/2016 12:09:00 AM

thank you so very much for the comment Arthur.. I am feeling loved :)))) Love and peace

Punnia Viswan Bhatia
Date: 4/13/2016 11:58:00 PM

ahahahahahahaha.....Arthur...i love your jocose manner :)) How are you? I was absent from here for some days. ;)