Punnia Viswan Bhatia Poet Free verse

That Forgotten Scent

~/~THAT FORGOTTEN SCENT~/~

In the dim yellow light
I saw you heading towards me
With a back pack
But to ask for the reserved seat besides!
The modest approach
The way you sat aside without a wish even to touch
The way you cared each time I dozed on your shoulders
Taking care of me to notice not
Makes you man
That hidden forgotten scent of your perfume
I wish to leave me not

-puvi-
(12/04/2016)

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Kai Michael Neumann August 2, 2016 at 3:50 AM A gentle man with a positive scent. Well written. Punnia Viswan Bhatia August 2, 2016 at 6:54 AM thank you Kai for the acknowledgement :) love and peace :x

Liam Mcdaid May 14, 2016 at 3:25 PM Beautifully painted piece almost like the flower forgetmenots excellent pen dear friend wishing you a blessing of a weekend

Arthur Vaso April 13, 2016 at 11:06 PM I love the way you weave your story and I loved the poem, and more importantly do you wish me to mail you my backpack? :) Punnia Viswan Bhatia April 14, 2016 at 12:09 AM thank you so very much for the comment Arthur.. I am feeling loved :)))) Love and peace Punnia Viswan Bhatia April 13, 2016 at 11:58 PM ahahahahahahaha.....Arthur...i love your jocose manner :)) How are you? I was absent from here for some days. ;)