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That Fateful Night

From across the room our eyes first met; You were talking to the party’s host. Immediately I knew I would never forget This beauty who enticed me the most. An arrow pierced me from cupid’s ghost. Upon my approach, your smile encouraged me; Yet, robbed me of my well rehearsed words. Your sweet “Hello”, was received so strikingly; A more beautiful song never sung by a bird. My awkwardness must have seemed so absurd. How ever your heart I dared make my conquest, I assure you, I cannot comprehend. All night I knew I had to give it my best And until won I would never end. I fell in love with you; then made you my friend. I will always remember that fateful night, As the evening my lost soul was saved. As soon as you came into my sight, I knew my life’s path was now paved; And ever since, I’ve been well behaved.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 3/25/2011 3:22:00 PM
Hey,now you can turn this wonderful poem in to the three senryu, when our eyes met!! Congrats on your super win, Joe!
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Date: 3/25/2011 5:34:00 AM
Congrats on a well deserved win, Joe. Excellent piece. Nice going. Ralph
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Date: 3/24/2011 9:28:00 PM
A beautiful poem. Many congrats dear friend.
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Date: 3/24/2011 6:26:00 PM
Good to see you at the top Joe. Congratulations on your worthy honor in second place. Agape, Moses
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Date: 3/24/2011 2:28:00 PM
Congrats Joe on your 2nd place win in Francine's contest with this awesome entry my friend.. enjoy your top spot where the air is as rare as your lovely words..
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Date: 3/24/2011 2:18:00 PM
LOL last line really made me smile, from how much you always show you are in love I'm sure you do behave! Congrad's On this fine win! Light & Love
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Date: 3/24/2011 1:06:00 PM
Congratulations on your win..Sara
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Date: 3/24/2011 12:04:00 PM
Congratulations on your win in Francine's "Make Me Swoon" contest Joe. Love, Carol
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Date: 3/24/2011 11:04:00 AM
Another Masterpiece! Joe. Many congrat's on your Second Place Win. Elaine
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Date: 3/24/2011 10:31:00 AM
congrats on your second place win in my contest Joe, wonderfully romantic entry
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Date: 3/11/2011 3:27:00 AM
how sootthing with expressions that make a heart quiver, joe.. winning streaks to you.. :) huggs, nette
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