That Faraway Look In Your Eyes

THAT FARAWAY LOOK IN YOUR EYES

I’m waiting for you here, 
thinking ‘bout you all night long
Can’t believe what you said, 
thought our love was deep and strong

You say, you think our love is broken,
Can’t be fixed with crazy glue
I  said I think you must be joking
Now I see you believe it’s true

Chorus
There is a faraway look in your eyes
I can see it…
There is a leaving me look in your eyes
I can feel it

You say, you know just what I’m thinking
And you know all the bad that I do
Just when did you stop believing?
You’ve left me here, feeling like a fool.

You keep  checking up on my cell phone,
Wondering if she’s calling me
You follow wherever my eyes go,
Imagining all it is I see


Chorus
There is a faraway look in your eyes
I can see it…
There is a leaving me look in your eyes
I can feel it

I’ve been thinking about our love, 
thought for sure it was going to last
Funny how your mind, can play tricks, and
I see the wheels have come off the tracks.

I’ve never been with anyone else
How could you think so low of me?
I’m obsessed with no one but you,
But, you’re imprisoned by your jealousy

Chorus
There is a faraway look in your eyes
I can see it…
There is a leaving me look in your eyes
I can feel it

Repeat chorus

Finale

I’m still waiting for you here
Thinking about you 
all night long.

Copyright John Derek Hamilton 
July 30,2018
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Dutta Avatar
August 12, 2018 at 7:05 AM
Possessiveness runs parallel with love. Wait. She will be back.
Hamilton Avatar
August 12, 2018 at 12:56 PM
Thanks Anisha, it's just a song, not real life!
Warrior Avatar
August 8, 2018 at 8:46 AM
The Songman strikes again...excellent verse my friend...love & song...^WW^
Hamilton Avatar
August 8, 2018 at 2:07 PM
Thanks WW I've got another song done, if you know how to send a wave file I can send it to you!
Daniel Avatar
August 8, 2018 at 8:13 AM
Yeah, "a leaving me look" phrase is new, yet old, a sad lyric, John:)
Hamilton Avatar
August 8, 2018 at 2:06 PM
Thanks Jo
Dietrich Avatar
August 1, 2018 at 3:32 PM
a "leaving me look" That is such a cool phrase you used. Love the lyrics and the chorus.
Hamilton Avatar
August 1, 2018 at 6:12 PM
Thanks Andrea
Horsman Avatar
August 1, 2018 at 4:53 AM
Wonderful poetry, yes to music with it, John, love it..Harry
Hamilton Avatar
August 1, 2018 at 11:04 AM
Thanks Harry
Ashley Avatar
July 30, 2018 at 9:56 PM
Oh, such a sad and heartbreaking situation to be in, John. You write deep, longing heartache like no one else.. the kind of gripping emotion that reaches in and grabs you by the heart so you have no choice but to feel the verses instead of just reading them. An excellent and poignant lyric my talented friend.. Warmest wishes always.. ~Susan
Hamilton Avatar
July 31, 2018 at 8:39 AM
Thanks Susan for your visit and truly great comment, I do appreciate it!
Michael Avatar
July 30, 2018 at 2:55 PM
Meaningful lyrics indeed...a sad sad song...passing in the breeze...Nice one John...All the best
Hamilton Avatar
July 31, 2018 at 8:38 AM
Thanks Arturo!
Allison Avatar
July 30, 2018 at 11:57 AM
Such touching words John, You really should get your lyrics set to music :-) hugs Jan xx
Hamilton Avatar
July 30, 2018 at 1:04 PM
Hi Jan, I actually have a few songwriters doing that, I tried to upload a song yesterday, but can't figure it out!
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