That Exquisite Moment

The sound of your voice Is like a symphony by Beethoven A beautiful melody by Schubert A piano concerto by Mozart I am totally enthralled by you No longer can I resist your beauty I must have you, embrace you Feel your warmth I am totally enamoured by you Entranced by your seductive eyes Your luscious red lips Your flaxen hair My heart beats loudly in my chest At the mere sight of you I must have you My arms ache to hold you My fingers long to explore every inch of your body To know a passion so extreme A tenderness I've yet to experience To gaze upon your angelic face How else to explain this feeling This desire, this utter craving To hold you, to enter your private world Till that ultimate moment of bliss That moment when emotions explode And we become one The outside world no longer exists In that exquisite moment There is only you and I among the stars We are one! © Jack Ellison 2014

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Date: 1/17/2014 5:41:00 PM
Miss Kitty Purffect holds the hearts of every guy here. She has the voice of an angel. But alas, she loves only Aramadilly Billy... She's broke more hearts than you can count... Billy's a lucky guy.
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Jack Ellison
Date: 1/18/2014 6:07:00 PM
Ain't love grand... just made that up! A poem??? Hmmm! XOXOX
Date: 1/17/2014 6:38:00 AM
Becca sure has inspired a great man (that would be you Jack, lol) to write great things my friend! I surely enjoyed reading this exceptional poem written expertly by you! What a fabulous and supreme piece, Great Work!!
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Date: 1/17/2014 6:45:00 AM
I owe her big time for the encouragement she sent me! Hmmm! 'Great man'... kinda like that!!! LOL
Date: 1/17/2014 5:34:00 AM
I have no words...I have no words for this write. It is beyond beautiful...Kenny, you sure are inspired. Becca should get an award for encouraging you to try this form...You amaze. So beautiful...Going to my favorites! AWESOME!
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Jack Ellison
Date: 1/17/2014 5:43:00 AM
Eileen, my dearest sweet Eileen! You bring me to tears with such utter words of love! I can't express what they mean to me... I thank you oh so much, dear friend! I must share your accolades with our dear talented friend Rebecca! Sweet love and tender hugs, Kenny XOX
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