That Elusive Ingredient

I'm feeling a right nincompoop; my spirits are starting to droop. I need to amaze, a magical phrase, which wins me first prize - in the Soup. ~
For Andrea Dietrich's Limerick Contest.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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June 10, 2012 at 7:26 AM
Congrats Charles on your win!Enjoyed the read!!
Johnson Avatar
June 9, 2012 at 12:40 PM
Perfect rhyme. Perfect meter. A great limerick. Love, Joyce
Taylor Avatar
June 9, 2012 at 11:48 AM
Congrats, Charles. Excellent. Nice going. Ralph
Brown Avatar
June 9, 2012 at 7:12 AM
Congratulations on your win in Andrea's "Limerick" contest Charles. Love, Carol
Williams Avatar
June 9, 2012 at 7:04 AM
Charles congrats on your win...David
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
June 9, 2012 at 5:30 AM
Congratulations on a fine limerick xx you will get there by the looks of your writing ..
Dietrich Avatar
June 9, 2012 at 12:40 AM
Congratulations, sorry not first (you would have to make a naughty joke for that here) but this is perfectly rhymed, metered and sweet.
Collins Avatar
June 4, 2012 at 11:15 AM
Very cute.
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June 4, 2012 at 10:56 AM
Very nice! Terry
Bauer Avatar
June 4, 2012 at 10:44 AM
clever and creative! nice one!
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