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That Dawn Will Rise

THAT DAWN WILL RISE. When man will not look down upon man,yes, that dawn will rise, Where wisdom will get a chance to access,that dawn will rise. Human respect will not be measured with money and fame, Clouds of sadness will fade,pure hearts assess,that dawn will rise. Misery will be taken care of,poor get enough bread, Power will bend its ego to confess,that dawn will rise. Goodwill will not be taken for granted,virtues be praised, Innocent be given chance to express,that dawn will rise. When the wave will not be thirsty,spontaneous in state, And compose anthems of upsurge to bless,that dawn will rise. Where every eye will have no fear,every move no limit, To meet Mariya, falcon will address,that dawn will rise. P.S....Attempted Ghazal form for the first time...quite a task...enjoyed. Thank you, T.Hicks. 14 Syllables per line checked at www. how many syllables . com. Contest:Give me a Ghazal. Sponsor:Timothy Hicks. 23 March 2016

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Date: 11/27/2016 7:44:00 AM
Full of hope, and inherent strength. Amazing ghazal, Rizwana!
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Rizwana Bhurani
Date: 11/28/2016 7:18:00 AM
Thanks.. . regards
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Rizwana Bhurani
Date: 11/28/2016 4:29:00 AM
Thanks.. . regards
Date: 5/19/2016 8:48:00 PM
How did i miss this Ghazal? It is a very well done. It seems that you are like a pro in this style. You should do this more often.
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Pashang Salehi
Date: 8/5/2016 1:21:00 AM
Ghazal king!!!! wow... thank you.... you do not know how talented you are.....
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Rizwana Bhurani
Date: 5/20/2016 6:15:00 AM
Can't believe Ghazal king is commenting.....I am thrilled.... Ustadji....regards
Date: 3/31/2016 5:41:00 AM
Woh subah kabhi to aayegi...that dawn will rise. Lovely Ghazal Rizwana.
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Rizwana Bhurani
Date: 3/31/2016 9:07:00 AM
Hey....telepathy...salutation to Sahir ludhiyanvi......no match......is naachiz ne koshhish ki......whr r u from..Assalamoalaikum Thank for dropping by
Date: 3/29/2016 5:26:00 PM
Hi Rizwana, Congratulations on your win in the contest....Vlad.
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Rizwana Bhurani
Date: 3/31/2016 9:08:00 AM
Thank you...regards
Date: 3/27/2016 2:10:00 PM
Many congrats on your win Rizwana:-) hugs jan xx
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Rizwana Bhurani
Date: 3/31/2016 9:09:00 AM
Thank you....regards
Date: 3/27/2016 12:01:00 PM
And best wishes to you Rizwana...pd
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Date: 3/27/2016 9:37:00 AM
Congratulations Rizwana.... Linda
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Rizwana Bhurani
Date: 3/27/2016 11:18:00 AM
Thank you.....best wishes
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Rizwana Bhurani
Date: 3/27/2016 10:59:00 AM
Thank you.....best wishes
Date: 3/27/2016 8:43:00 AM
A wonderful subject to your poem Rizwana, well written.
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Rizwana Bhurani
Date: 3/27/2016 11:18:00 AM
Thank you...glad you liked the matter....best wishes
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Rizwana Bhurani
Date: 3/27/2016 11:00:00 AM
Thank you...glad you liked the matter....best wishes
Date: 3/27/2016 2:03:00 AM
Very well done congrats on your placement!
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Rizwana Bhurani
Date: 3/27/2016 11:00:00 AM
Thanks.......best wishes
Date: 3/26/2016 11:59:00 PM
Congrats on your win, Rizwana! Loved your choice of refrain and the way you expressed your message. Thanks for entering my contest and trying out the ghazal form :)
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Rizwana Bhurani
Date: 3/27/2016 11:03:00 AM
My pleasure to be a part of this contest..... Thank you....best wishes....look forwsrd to try new forms of poetry....regards
Date: 3/25/2016 9:56:00 PM
You met the challenge well ...good luck in the contest
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Rizwana Bhurani
Date: 3/27/2016 11:03:00 AM
Thank you....best wishes
Date: 3/23/2016 8:06:00 PM
Thank you SIR....... Best wishes always
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