That Dawn Will Rise

THAT DAWN WILL RISE. When man will not look down upon man,yes, that dawn will rise, Where wisdom will get a chance to access,that dawn will rise. Human respect will not be measured with money and fame, Clouds of sadness will fade,pure hearts assess,that dawn will rise. Misery will be taken care of,poor get enough bread, Power will bend its ego to confess,that dawn will rise. Goodwill will not be taken for granted,virtues be praised, Innocent be given chance to express,that dawn will rise. When the wave will not be thirsty,spontaneous in state, And compose anthems of upsurge to bless,that dawn will rise. Where every eye will have no fear,every move no limit, To meet Mariya, falcon will address,that dawn will rise. P.S....Attempted Ghazal form for the first time...quite a task...enjoyed. Thank you, T.Hicks. 14 Syllables per line checked at www. how many syllables . com. Contest:Give me a Ghazal. Sponsor:Timothy Hicks. 23 March 2016
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Kundu Avatar
November 27, 2016 at 7:44 AM
Full of hope, and inherent strength. Amazing ghazal, Rizwana!
Bhurani Avatar
November 28, 2016 at 7:18 AM
Thanks.. . regards
Bhurani Avatar
November 28, 2016 at 4:29 AM
Thanks.. . regards
Salehi Avatar
May 19, 2016 at 8:48 PM
How did i miss this Ghazal? It is a very well done. It seems that you are like a pro in this style. You should do this more often.
Salehi Avatar
August 5, 2016 at 1:21 AM
Ghazal king!!!! wow... thank you.... you do not know how talented you are.....
Bhurani Avatar
May 20, 2016 at 6:15 AM
Can't believe Ghazal king is commenting.....I am thrilled.... Ustadji....regards
Ali Avatar
March 31, 2016 at 5:41 AM
Woh subah kabhi to aayegi...that dawn will rise. Lovely Ghazal Rizwana.
Bhurani Avatar
March 31, 2016 at 9:07 AM
Hey....telepathy...salutation to Sahir ludhiyanvi......no match......is naachiz ne koshhish ki......whr r u from..Assalamoalaikum Thank for dropping by
Raven Avatar
March 29, 2016 at 5:26 PM
Hi Rizwana, Congratulations on your win in the contest....Vlad.
Bhurani Avatar
March 31, 2016 at 9:08 AM
Thank you...regards
Allison Avatar
March 27, 2016 at 2:10 PM
Many congrats on your win Rizwana:-) hugs jan xx
Bhurani Avatar
March 31, 2016 at 9:09 AM
Thank you....regards
A   Avatar
March 27, 2016 at 12:01 PM
And best wishes to you Rizwana...pd
A   Avatar
March 27, 2016 at 9:37 AM
Congratulations Rizwana.... Linda
Bhurani Avatar
March 27, 2016 at 11:18 AM
Thank you.....best wishes
Bhurani Avatar
March 27, 2016 at 10:59 AM
Thank you.....best wishes
Inman Avatar
March 27, 2016 at 8:43 AM
A wonderful subject to your poem Rizwana, well written.
Bhurani Avatar
March 27, 2016 at 11:18 AM
Thank you...glad you liked the matter....best wishes
Bhurani Avatar
March 27, 2016 at 11:00 AM
Thank you...glad you liked the matter....best wishes
Davey Avatar
March 27, 2016 at 2:03 AM
Very well done congrats on your placement!
Bhurani Avatar
March 27, 2016 at 11:00 AM
Thanks.......best wishes
Hicks Avatar
March 26, 2016 at 11:59 PM
Congrats on your win, Rizwana! Loved your choice of refrain and the way you expressed your message. Thanks for entering my contest and trying out the ghazal form :)
Bhurani Avatar
March 27, 2016 at 11:03 AM
My pleasure to be a part of this contest..... Thank you....best wishes....look forwsrd to try new forms of poetry....regards
May Avatar
March 25, 2016 at 9:56 PM
You met the challenge well ...good luck in the contest
Bhurani Avatar
March 27, 2016 at 11:03 AM
Thank you....best wishes
Bhurani Avatar
March 23, 2016 at 8:06 PM
Thank you SIR....... Best wishes always
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