That Brown Haired Girl

After school on a winter day
The air short of cold, but crisp
He remembered her angelic voice 
With a slight and cute little lisp

Distracted, while peddling his bike
Leaving most thoughts of school behind
There she was, that brown haired girl
That was so much on his mind

He stopped and asked what she said
She said, "I thed, won't you thstop!"
He asked if she would like to ride
And up on his bike she did hop!

When she said, "You're passionate!"
He could have floated through the air
Then she said, "You're passion my house,"
"It wathe that white one back there!"

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019



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Date: 4/17/2019 8:00:00 PM
Bloody brilliant PAT … you've certainly got a special way with words haven't you - thanks PAT - Lindsay
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Date: 4/18/2019 9:25:00 AM
Popped into my head one day. Spooky place, that!!.....80)
Date: 4/15/2019 4:50:00 PM
this is adorable, pat! i very much enjoyed...
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Date: 4/15/2019 5:20:00 PM
Thanks Ilene! That means a lot!.........80)
Date: 4/15/2019 4:19:00 PM
Cute. Very cute. I got a good laugh. Have a good day.
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Date: 4/15/2019 5:21:00 PM
Thank you sir!!!...................pat
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