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That Breath

There is a power which drives us all, and Our consciousness is a breath which Has been pushed into us Like we press on buttons to switch on In-animated machines! Yet, it has chosen to remain subtle And elusive, as so powerful it is That should we set our eyes upon it We would care not to suffer in this world For actions we have committed once, In a life which we remember not! A power which has bid us be For reasons known to itself A power which loves us nevertheless For it has seen into our potential In making of our world, one worthy of Our capabilities! A power which none can describe Though many do philosophize about A power similar to light A power to which we shall return A power unto which we submit A power so like a fire, attracting us, Mere little moths flying aimlessly!

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Date: 1/29/2023 8:05:00 AM
Dear Anoucheka, Your poem is powerful and wise - "a power that loves us nevertheless..." My thoughts, too. Congratulations on your win!
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Date: 1/27/2023 6:56:00 AM
Dear Anoucheka, congratulations for your excellent win in Seeker’s contest. Your poem is insightful and beautifully expressed. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
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Date: 1/26/2023 5:11:00 AM
Big Congrats to win . Have good days
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