That Boyish Smile

O, the love of pure heart's passion
    thrumming wildly beneath his blouse

  What he lacks in words, he makes up in action
    then look ~ that boyish smile of satisfaction
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Allison Avatar
July 12, 2023 at 1:05 AM
hahaha - rip the shirt off and I'm ready lol, thanks for the giggle this grey morning:-) hugs Jan xx (the captcha is RTC - hit me hard as 2 people killed during the race practices here yesterday its beyond sad)
Baker Avatar
July 11, 2023 at 5:22 PM
Fun Couplets, Gershon. True and brought a smile to my face. Thanks for sharing, my friend. Bill
Romios Avatar
July 11, 2023 at 4:03 PM
Hi G, I am suffering from intellectual stupidity. The word blouse threw me, In all my decades on earth, I never saw a boy in a blouse. Unless he is a part of the Pride Movement … which was not around till lately nor were boys running around in crop tops Pangie
Romios Avatar
July 11, 2023 at 9:28 PM
Duh, being an Alumnus of Loyola, I actually studied Shakespeare. But I got lost on the one. Apologies. Denseoid Pangie.
Wolf Avatar
July 11, 2023 at 5:00 PM
Nah... But decades, shmekades... 'blouse' and 'shirt' were used more interchangeably by authors of the 18th and 19th centuries, both French and English. (Dickens, for example... Shakespeare too in the 17th century). Not to worry about such trifles, please. ~ gw
Rhymer Avatar
July 11, 2023 at 12:58 AM
Made me smile that girlish smile of satisfaction.
Wolf Avatar
July 11, 2023 at 4:58 PM
O, you kid! Thanks, Vickey!
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