That Balloon

that balloon won't fly 'twas said but its tether broke... freedom it possessed
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December 11, 2013 at 9:29 AM
ha ha,, I want THAT BALLOON..... xox..Linda
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November 30, 2013 at 1:11 AM
an untethered balloon free at last!! Great imagery.
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November 29, 2013 at 6:52 AM
Cool, I really loved this clever write my friend! You have amazed me by the splendor of this grandiose poem! I really enjoyed reading this awesome poem this morning! What a fantastic piece, Great Work!!
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November 29, 2013 at 5:50 AM
:)... like this one, Sara ! - Have a nice weekend. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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