Thanksgiving

Tender moments, God's grace
Little hand in mine
God lets us care for the children
while we are here to
Teach them the right way-
Serve God, value others, 
Care for the orphans and widows.


Thank you God for my son!!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Fraser Avatar
September 18, 2009 at 3:42 PM
Lovely touching poem, and i too for my four>>James
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September 6, 2009 at 4:27 PM
What a beautiful day and what splendid poetry I am reading. I wish you the best in your writing endeavors Doris. Love, Carol
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September 6, 2009 at 12:05 AM
beautiful write Doris--charma
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September 5, 2009 at 4:27 PM
Hi Doris, Ah what lovely sentiments you pen. Full of much love and intuitive insight. Love the line "Little hand in mine" Enjoy those special moments for they go by soooo fast. Thanks for your most welcome comments. Many Blessings to you and yours sweetie! Take care Love Light Truth Patricia
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September 5, 2009 at 7:21 AM
Beautiful poem about a beautiful child. Mom
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September 4, 2009 at 8:31 PM
lovely! Doris!...jim
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September 4, 2009 at 6:45 PM
So much to be thankful for, Doris...indeed! (ps...yes..to your question. I tried my had at several cinquain when I first started posting poems...haven't for awhile, however. And I agree, it is fun to try different forms....I think it stretches our poetry skills. I'm enjoying yours! :) Carrie
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