David Kavanagh Poet Tanka

::Thanksgiving::

crops brought in fields bare
      harvest time answered prayers 
             festive feast prepared 
       laughter sounds family shares
     new born stirs ~ why hello there 


A THANKSGIVING TANKA Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: L MILTON HANKINS
How many syllables 5/7/5/7/7
10/24/2021

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Christopher Flaherty November 2, 2021 at 11:46 AM Rebirth David Kavanagh November 2, 2021 at 11:58 AM A perpetual cycle

Jenna Logan October 24, 2021 at 12:34 PM The season’s harvest included a new family member. How wonderful, David and so is your Tanka. David Kavanagh October 24, 2021 at 12:46 PM Heya Jenna, the most memorable occasions really are when a new baby is welcomed properly to the whole family for the first time, absolutely clueless yet crowns the occasion, cheers David

Tom Cunningham October 24, 2021 at 11:53 AM When you look at third world countries you come to realise how lucky you are and should be ever thankful. Good luck in the contest David. Tom David Kavanagh October 24, 2021 at 12:25 PM I agree Tom, yet sometimes we do just take everything for granted, in my mother's early years they literally lived on porridge morning, noon, and night, cheers David

Jan Allison October 24, 2021 at 11:32 AM lovely tanka David:-) hugs Jan xx David Kavanagh October 24, 2021 at 12:19 PM Thank you Jan, I can never resist a tanka, hopefully it's liked, cheers David

Darlene De Beaulieu October 24, 2021 at 11:24 AM Hello David kavanagh, I enjoyed your Haiku.Enjoy your day my friend. Darlene De Beaulieu October 25, 2021 at 10:20 AM Cheers!! Darlene De Beaulieu October 24, 2021 at 3:51 PM Hello David Kavanagh, your welcome. enjoy your evening m friend. Cheers!! Darlene David Kavanagh October 24, 2021 at 12:18 PM Heya Darlene, thank you so much for looking in, and nice comments, cheers David