Thanksgiving

Leaves turned red and gold
Crisp wind blushes childrens' cheeks
            indoors turkey roasts
   Family gathers, prayers, thanks
         Joyful in bounty of love

October 20, 2021
Thanksgiving Japanese Tanka Poetry Contest
Sponsored by Milton Hankins
6th place!
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Calasibetta Avatar
November 15, 2021 at 9:10 AM
Ann, a beautiful Tanka that paints a lovely Thanksgiving,it's depth and true meaning. Blessings, Paulette
Peck Avatar
November 16, 2021 at 7:58 AM
That's so kind of you, Paulette. Thank you, and take care.
Miller Avatar
November 11, 2021 at 7:41 AM
I Loved this one, congratulations.
Peck Avatar
November 16, 2021 at 7:55 AM
Oh, thank you, Terry! And I love your comments :)
Goldsmith Avatar
November 11, 2021 at 6:55 AM
Congratulations on your win. A "Beautiful" write. Have a blessed day writing away.............
Agustin Avatar
November 11, 2021 at 3:50 AM
Wow! Congrats! Thanks for this. God bless you.
Peck Avatar
November 16, 2021 at 7:54 AM
Thank you, Beata, for your kind comments!~
Rodrigues Avatar
November 10, 2021 at 8:43 PM
Well captured, Ann! Congratulations!
Hankins Avatar
November 10, 2021 at 3:50 PM
Beautifully-written tanka for my contest. So happy to see you placed, Ann. Happy Thanksgiving!
Peck Avatar
November 16, 2021 at 7:51 AM
Thank you so much, Milton. I enjoyed writing a tanka for your contest!
May Avatar
October 22, 2021 at 9:57 AM
Love the last line of your Thanksgiving write Ann, best wishes
Peck Avatar
October 23, 2021 at 1:04 PM
Thank you, Joseph. Tanka form was new to me.
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