Thanks To Aunt Katie

Expectantly and nervously
I sought an empty chair.
Cousins I hadn’t seen for years
Were already gathered there.

We had come to hear the reading
Of Great Aunt Katie’s final will.
She had been left a wealthy widow 
By my mama’s Uncle Bill.

We’d heard throughout the long years
That our Uncle Bill was loaded.
He was growing richer every day
Until his heart exploded.

Aunt Katie retreated from us
After Uncle Bill had died.
We heard that she was sorrowing
And every day she cried.

The lawyer cleared his husky throat
Before he began the reading.
He spoke to a captive audience,
Which every word was heeding.

I heard my name and was surprised
At the very princely sum
I would receive conditionally….
The conditions yet to come.

When the lawyer finished reading
All the bequests to the heirs,
He told them the conditions
Before inheritance was theirs.

Each would be given money 
To be used for one in need.
We’d have to wait for our bequests
Until we’d finished our good deed.

It was not to go to a charity
Or individual that we’d known.
The money must go to someone
Who was struggling on his own.

As the daughter of two teachers, 
I thought it might be fine
To seek out a worthy student
To fulfill this task of mine.

The school principal was happy
To tell me of a worthy lad
Who was struggling in his schooling
Without help from Mom and Dad.

He’d won a scholarship for high grades 
But it wouldn’t be enough
To pay all of his expenses.
And it would be mighty tough

To keep up with his studies 
In between his work and sleep.
I awarded twenty-five thousand,
Bargain with Aunt Kate to keep.

The young man is now the owner
Of an enviable degree,
And a job in his profession 
With a future that’s debt free.

He says he’ll pay it forward
And I hope he surely will
In gratitude to our Aunt Katie
And her husband, Uncle Bill.


For  contest
Help the Needy contest  Won 2nd place

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011



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Date: 2/21/2011 11:15:00 PM
Hey, I found one that I had not yet seen .And I also see it placed in the contest! Congratulations, sorry I never reviewed this winners list yet! Luv, Andrea
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Date: 2/17/2011 1:56:00 PM
Nice sentiments and nice win! Congrad's Light & Love
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Date: 2/17/2011 12:34:00 PM
Wow, Joyce, what a great story behind this poem. Uncle Bill was obviously a compassionate man who wanted his wealth to be distributed to those who needed it most. Congratulations on your big win, dear! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 2/16/2011 6:08:00 PM
Excellent job sweet lady JJ! Congratulations on your worthy poem's place at the top. Agape, Moses
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Date: 2/16/2011 5:33:00 PM
Great descriptiveness and rhyming helped you win second place in the contest. Congratulations!
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Date: 2/16/2011 3:39:00 PM
Smile on your win in the contest.........George
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Date: 2/16/2011 2:32:00 PM
Congrats Joyce on your wonderful win in Carol's contest with this spectacular and sensitive write my friend.. enjoy with luv..
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Date: 2/16/2011 2:17:00 PM
Please accept my congratulations on the second place win in the contest, Joyce
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Date: 2/16/2011 1:31:00 PM
Congratulations on your placement Joyce in my contest "I Helped The Needy". Love, Carol
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Date: 1/12/2011 3:11:00 AM
A fabulous poem - and a gorgeous story! Liz
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Date: 1/11/2011 6:59:00 PM
What a wonderful write Joyce... truly a top winner for sure as this is a masterpiece and a good lesson too ... good luck my friend .. awesome words and rhyme flow..
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