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Thanks My Love

Thanks my dear love, for locking me inside your warm
Heart which is filled with true love & care in
Abundance for me,feels safe as though I am
       in my mother's womb once again.Sitting amidst
Naked arteries,ventricles and chambers,can sense 
       those pounding thumps 
Kissing me and caressing my brain to
Stay there comfortably as long as I desire.


21-6-2020

Second place in the Contest.
Note:THANKS -ACROSTIC Poetry Contest
Sponsored by Beata Agustin

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Paul Callus

Date: 7/3/2020 1:16:00 PM

This is quite creative, Deepa. You will certainly be forever in your mother's heart. ~ Congratulations on your fine win. Regards // paul

V. Deepa
Date: 7/3/2020 1:24:00 PM

Hello Paul Sir, Thankyou very much for the lovely words of appreciation.:-)I am glad to know that you liked my work. Have a wonderful day.Take care. Warmest regards~Deepa:-)

Aditi Mishra

Date: 7/1/2020 1:56:00 PM

I love how this muse is different from all others. A beautiful expression of gratitude to love like a breath of fresh air. Congratulations on your win Deepa! Blessings and much love :)

V. Deepa
Date: 7/3/2020 4:18:00 AM

Hello Aditi mam, Thankyou so much for your marvelous review.:-)I am always delighted to receive lovely appreciations and blessings from wonderful writer like you:-) Best wishes for you too. Keep inspiring us:-) Take care.Much love~Deepa:-)

Funom Makama

Date: 6/25/2020 2:15:00 PM

This is a excellent Acrostic. Good luck in the contest

V. Deepa
Date: 6/26/2020 12:55:00 AM

Hello sir, Thanks a lot for your constant appreciation and support.I feel honoured by your generous words.:-) Keep inspiring.Best wishes. Take care.Warm regards~Deepa:-)

Brian Strand

Date: 6/22/2020 6:52:00 AM

V.Deepa,I prefer the acrostic style you have adopted with this poem it is easier on the eye and has a more poetic feel than if the first letter of each line is emphasised capitalised in black, as so many so do

V. Deepa
Date: 6/22/2020 8:13:00 AM

Dear Brian Sir, I humbly accept your advice..:-) I wish my android phone offers me some techniques to bold my letters. Anyways I will try and explore. Thankyou for the surprise visit and your first comment.:-) I used to expect your reviews for the poems that won in your contests from past 2 months.:-) Got one now for unexpected. Thankyou.:-) Best wishes for your new journey like you said in the blog reply. Take care.Warm regards~Deepa

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/21/2020 2:50:00 PM

what a sweet one and so unique comparing it to a baby in a womb!

V. Deepa
Date: 6/22/2020 4:01:00 AM

Hello mam, Thanks a lot for your generous appreciation .Am glad you liked my concept.:-) Best wishes for your works too. Take care.Warm regards~Deepa:-)