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Thankful For This Life

There has been a time in my life of deep and great despair, and I am grateful for all the helping hands; because of people who cared this girl stands, stands here strong, serene and at peace with a gratitude tear. Even for a life threatening deathly event I am deeply beholden, for as I stood at the gate of Heaven weeping; my heart and soul the Lord was safe keeping, pleased, I opened eyes to a new day and a bright sun golden. I will never forget a day I was feeling pretty sorry for my situation, then, I saw a woman with no legs and no arms; but her smile and her laugh were her charms, so humbled, I let go of torment and that has been my salvation. ____________________________________ November 7, 2018 Poetry/Enclosed Rhyme/Thankful For This Life Copyright Protected, ID 18-1083-388-01 All Rights Reserved. Written under Pseudonym. Written for the contest, Thankful sponsor, Tania Kitchin Third Place

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Date: 12/15/2018 9:34:00 PM
This is an amazing and true gospel. I have a friend that sings at nursing homes and he met this lady that could not move but to him had more more joy and peace than anyone he had met. The love and spirit of the Lord can only bring this
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Constance La France
Date: 12/18/2018 2:39:00 PM
Thank you Stephan for visiting my poem with that great comment, appreciate ~
Date: 12/8/2018 9:37:00 AM
Thank you so much Tania, Beata, Carolyn, Brian, Wendy, Jan and Barbara for visiting my poem with those great comments and congratulations, appreciate a lot ~
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Date: 12/7/2018 8:12:00 PM
congrats on win, and that you woke able to draw a breath, and write . bbn
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Constance La France
Date: 12/8/2018 9:36:00 AM
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Date: 12/7/2018 5:26:00 PM
We have so much to be thankful for constance , many congratulations on your win :-) hugs Jan xx
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Constance La France
Date: 12/8/2018 9:35:00 AM
Hugs!
Date: 12/7/2018 2:39:00 PM
We have so much to be thankful for but often take blessings for granted. Congratulations,Dear Heart.
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Constance La France
Date: 12/8/2018 9:35:00 AM
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Date: 12/7/2018 1:27:00 PM
Classic. Congratulations on your deserved win.
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Constance La France
Date: 12/8/2018 9:35:00 AM
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Date: 12/7/2018 10:48:00 AM
There is a good lesson to be learned from this meaningful poem, Dear Heart. Sometimes we just don't appreciate all the blessings we already have. Congratulations! Hugs, Carolyn
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Constance La France
Date: 12/8/2018 9:34:00 AM
Hugs!
Date: 12/6/2018 11:58:00 PM
Your poetic heart has expressed your gratefulness; such I feel, and can visualize thru your words. Congrats! God bless you.
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Constance La France
Date: 12/8/2018 9:34:00 AM
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Date: 12/6/2018 8:25:00 PM
I enjoyed your heartfelt witty poem, in our darkest days there are always others less fortunate and it helps us appreciate what we have, congratulations on your win!
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Constance La France
Date: 12/8/2018 9:34:00 AM
Tania, thanks for the contest and for my fine placement, appreciate ~.~
Date: 11/10/2018 11:09:00 AM
Thank you CayCay for visiting with that nice comment ~
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Date: 11/10/2018 8:06:00 AM
A Wow with a lovely flow. Poetry hugs ... CayCay
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Date: 11/7/2018 10:44:00 AM
Thank you Lin for visiting my poem and commenting, so thankful ~
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Date: 11/7/2018 10:34:00 AM
Your heartaches have touched you deeply, but through them all you still stand strong, Constance.
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