Thankful

The emerald water joins the azure sky
When eyes melt the distance between the two
And it's in this mixture I ask the why
Before life ends duly consumed and through
There's a need to measure our human cause
As I question my reason for being
The life in these two worlds give my mind pause
And I'll seek introspection for seeing
To Earth and Heaven that I separate
I will give thanks with purest adulation
To be part of the whole I'll celebrate
And know I've been part of their narration

  Life will end my body forever gone
  Its faded footprints now claimed by the dawn

1/23/17
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Daniel Avatar
March 12, 2017 at 8:21 AM
A lovely sonnet, Frederic:) congratulations on your win:)
Smith Avatar
March 11, 2017 at 9:18 AM
Back to congratulate you Frederic...
Martin Avatar
March 9, 2017 at 12:54 PM
Liked the language and philosophy. Congratulations on your win Frederic! :-)
Inman Avatar
March 9, 2017 at 6:38 AM
A wonderful sonnet Frederic.
Krampe Avatar
March 8, 2017 at 6:48 AM
Congrats on your win, Frederic. Beautiful, and though provoking.
Vinson Avatar
March 7, 2017 at 11:41 PM
I think that in the moment, there is a lot. Excellent poem, Frederic! : )
Carmack Avatar
March 7, 2017 at 11:11 PM
Thank you for this entry Frederic and congrats.
Parker Avatar
March 8, 2017 at 11:55 AM
Thank you rob for the kindness and your contest
Warrior Avatar
January 24, 2017 at 9:39 PM
Superbly done my friend Frederic......for now let us enjoy our company...god bless...^WW^
Manassian Avatar
January 24, 2017 at 2:29 PM
I wish you long life, dear. This is a beautiful write. Celebrate...and be part of the narration for you beautiful it. :) Thanks for your visit to my blog, dear.
Green Avatar
January 24, 2017 at 6:06 AM
I really enjoyed this Frederic. I think many of us ask this or these questions often, what is my purpose, why am I here? Hopefully someday it will be clear. Nicely done.
Turner Avatar
January 23, 2017 at 10:00 PM
Frederic, in your opinion, why do we care why we are here? Do you think, it's our vanity? When the day comes for looking back, what will we be looking for. Do you think, we'll try to forecast our judgement or is it just the brain on rewind? I guess we'll find out, huh? I love this thought provoking sonnet. Very well written:)
Parker Avatar
January 24, 2017 at 3:04 PM
why do we care why we are here, for the same reason we wanted to know what was on the other side of a mountain.as for looking back, it's to see the roads we traveled to cross the mountain and reflect on the path taken..and yes one day we will find out..or we won't
Smith Avatar
January 23, 2017 at 8:51 PM
I find, for some reason, the second line to be quite profound Frederick, well done and thank you...
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