Thankful

What am I thankful for?
As I lay here my mind searches 
Afraid of waking up 
it lurches
Vacilating within
the folds of my covers and brain
Trying to return 
to my slumber again
Attempting to hang on
to my infinite creativity 
That partial sleepiness 
and rapid eye activity

Wiping my eyes 
I'm partially awake
Giving heavy hands and legs a shake
Thankful for the hard decisions 
I've been forced to make
The people in my space 
who are real and not fake
So I ponder the breadth of my life
Sharing it with the love of my life
My sweeties tongue never cuts like a knife
She's my best friend 
lover confidant and wife
The gift of family without the pretend
A life and future
Not a desolate dead end
I never expected
To find myself here
I used to loath 
what I seen in the mirror
Now in God's Grace 
I have nothing to fear

Now I am older
Feeling more content
My thoughts flow freely
I'm not bogged down in cement
Thinking the things I think
Now I can say what I meant
No longer linear 
My thoughts can be bent
So I thank God 
for an open mind
Knowing what it mean's 
to open the blinds
If a man searches 
he'll be surprised by what he finds

Love health and time
Should never be wasted
Food, touch and moments 
are gifted to be tasted
Give more then you take
Your heart will be sated
Forget about comparisons
They are way over rated
Ambition and stuff
A poor substitute for living
Those who are take take taking
Have forgotten about the giving
Blessings change to curses
Not the place to go
Instead I want thankful
It helps my heart to grow


Richard Lamoureux

Written October 12th 2015

Contest Judged October 25th 2015

Trashed # 3 sponsor Broken Wings

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015



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Date: 3/21/2016 10:25:00 AM
Forgot to give you a one..lol
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Date: 3/21/2016 10:24:00 AM
Here comes the pitch,He gets all of this one, Its going going,back,way back its gone.Awesome work as always.. Justin
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 3/21/2016 12:57:00 PM
Thanks Justin, I had forgot about this one.
Date: 11/11/2015 4:38:00 PM
Hi Richard: Thanks for sharing your poetry on being thankful. As they say,"There but for the grace....
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 3/21/2016 12:58:00 PM
So true!
Date: 11/10/2015 12:28:00 AM
They got it right this time Richard a well deserve win. congratulations!!
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 3/21/2016 12:58:00 PM
Thanks Michael.
Date: 11/9/2015 1:47:00 PM
thank you for sharing this wonderful poem congrats on your win Richard:-) hugs jan xx
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 3/21/2016 12:58:00 PM
Thanks Jan.
Date: 11/9/2015 11:11:00 AM
Richard, Congratulations on your Trashed #3 win. SKAT
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 3/21/2016 12:59:00 PM
Thanks SKAT.
Date: 10/18/2015 8:40:00 AM
Fantastic! As we grow and age we lose much along the way and learn to be truly thankful for what we keep.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 10/18/2015 8:48:00 AM
So true, aging is not for the faint of heart. So nice to have your visit Monterey. Hugs Rick.
Date: 10/16/2015 8:34:00 AM
Always a pleasure to read your amazing poems !!! Richard.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 10/16/2015 9:04:00 AM
Thanks Charmaine.:0)
Date: 10/15/2015 7:27:00 PM
A wonderful poem to share.. Hugs LINDA
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 10/15/2015 8:16:00 PM
Thanks Linda!:0)
Date: 10/15/2015 6:50:00 AM
God is delighted whenever a thankful heart He sees, Dear Richard! Excellent didactic poem! A seven, my friend!
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 10/15/2015 7:04:00 AM
Thanks Demetrios, much appreciated.
Date: 10/14/2015 7:35:00 PM
Hi Rick, I think most of us have more than we realise to be thankful for, great reminder. Take care, Richard
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 10/15/2015 12:33:00 AM
So true! Thanks Richard!
Date: 10/14/2015 4:41:00 PM
These are words of wisdom, spoken by one who has benefitted from life's experiences. We have a lot to be thankful for! // paul
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 10/15/2015 12:35:00 AM
Thanks Paul, having a few years under ones belt does have some benefits.
Date: 10/14/2015 3:42:00 PM
So Sweet I love this poem.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 10/15/2015 12:36:00 AM
Thanks Tabitha.
Date: 10/14/2015 11:47:00 AM
Beautiful thoughts. You are at your best with free verse, Rick! All the best! hugs!
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 10/15/2015 12:36:00 AM
Thanks Kim. ;0)
Date: 10/14/2015 9:19:00 AM
Lovely. Glad you have a wonderful marriage and lovingly family members and friends. You are blessed. I'm thankful for your friendship.
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 10/14/2015 10:09:00 AM
I'm guilty of that too. I'm glad he remembers our frame. We are dust....fallable. He forgives. Hugs
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 10/14/2015 9:45:00 AM
Yes, I am truly thankful although sometimes I fail to show God my appreciation.
Date: 10/13/2015 10:12:00 PM
this is wonderful, and I especially liked the sentiments in the last verse!
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 10/14/2015 9:45:00 AM
Thanks Andrea.;0)
Date: 10/13/2015 3:55:00 PM
A very wise and an eloquent write....I love how you conveyed your wonderful piece Richard. It's so much excellent and lovely...........A.M.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 10/14/2015 9:46:00 AM
Thanks A.M.
Date: 10/13/2015 3:55:00 AM
Happy Thanksgiving Richard Hope you are with your loved ones. This is a very nice piece a reflection of your feelings and the ones you love. Enjoyed reading. Blessings to you and all that you love.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 10/13/2015 7:51:00 AM
A belated happy thanksgiving to you as well.
Date: 10/12/2015 7:15:00 PM
Is it not wonderful to be thankful for what God has given I am so thankful for my family and the ability to share my life with you all I am truly thankful for you my son who brightens my life with his wonderful words Happy Thanksgiving Much love Mom
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 10/12/2015 9:09:00 PM
Happy thanksgiving to you too mom. Matthew and Harlene are back in Vancouver. We had a nice visit with them. Love ya!
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