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Thank You Dad

Thank you Dad: My father in the eyes of God, helped me for nine years I remember my bedroom, as young as being in the crib I remember the toys, the spinning top, and the ball with stars on it I had a place to visit where I could ride my red tricycle I was free to be me, as I played with joy! He taught me how to write the letters of the alphabet He was a well-known story teller himself He gave me small special gifts, I held close to me He even gave me a peacock feather that fell from his peacock My best friend lived nearby, we ran the fields together, so fun! His brother was a poet too and his other relative painted like I do I forgive the abandonment after a crisis happened, Because, he didn’t stand a chance against the Sands family Who took me away with all their control, and made me live a lie But, I will always remember what he told his sister: That I would be mighty in whatever I do! He had that confidence in me that no-one else did! - I have held onto that my entire life - I wouldn’t trade the first 9 years of time with him for anything! - Thank you Dad - Heidi Sands 1/13/19

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Date: 1/15/2019 3:01:00 PM
Wonderful tribute to your father. Cherish the memories. Great pen.
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Heidi Sands
Date: 1/15/2019 3:28:00 PM
Thank you very much Frank. I appreciate your visit and kind comment! :)
Date: 1/14/2019 4:48:00 AM
Beautiful Heidi!
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Heidi Sands
Date: 1/14/2019 5:06:00 AM
Thank you very much Bobby! :)
Date: 1/13/2019 7:58:00 PM
Wow! The beginning of this so reminds me of the poem I just posted called "Silence" which you already commented on! Similar feel. This is beautiful. :)
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Heidi Sands
Date: 1/14/2019 3:45:00 AM
Thank you Michael! That is an interesting observation with similar feel to it. I appreciate your comment :)
Date: 1/13/2019 6:10:00 PM
Hi Heidi, memories of being with a much beloved father. This is such a wonderful Your words paint such a vivid canvas Such joyous words Heidi. Each memory held within a chamber of the heart. Beautiful my friend. Has to be a fave. Have a wonderful Monday. Hugs....Mike. XX
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Heidi Sands
Date: 1/13/2019 6:13:00 PM
Thank you Mike ! I am happy you consider it a fave. I appreciate your thoughtful comment very much ! :)
Date: 1/13/2019 2:51:00 PM
I never knew my Dad. So I am glad you did for 9 years at least, Heidi. Always treasure those memories.
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Heidi Sands
Date: 1/13/2019 2:57:00 PM
I am sorry to hear that White Wolf. That is extremely hard not knowing. Yes, I will, thank you. I really appreciate your comment on this. I wish you the best :)
Date: 1/13/2019 2:41:00 PM
A fond look back to the days spent with a loving father..such a treasure to hold on to those memories.
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Heidi Sands
Date: 1/13/2019 2:42:00 PM
Yes it is. Thank you very much Vijay. Your support is always appreciated! :)
Date: 1/13/2019 2:25:00 PM
- Lovely written, Heidi ... from your memories and joys - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Heidi Sands
Date: 1/13/2019 2:31:00 PM
Thank you so much Anne-Lise :) I appreciate your comment. Have a nice day! hugs
Date: 1/13/2019 1:55:00 PM
Hi Heidi, It sounds like you have an amazing father. We must not forget the memories made, because it there that we get to see and visit them anytime we wish to! I had an amazing father too. From one daddy's girl to another, you've penned a heartfelt tribute/dedication to your father. Excellent job:-) Alexis
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Heidi Sands
Date: 1/13/2019 1:56:00 PM
Alexis, I can't thank you enough for your comment on this. It means a lot to me. I really appreciate it! :)

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