Than-Bauk variation
Here are a few more Than-Bauk, where I have used a particular letter-sound instead of a rhyme on the 4th, 3rd, and 2nd syllables (lines 1,2,3) I find this to be a fun alternative to the limited rhyme version. Hope you enjoy. Let me know which ones you like.
careful blue sea
calm the sail breeze
why spoil with land
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spite words you ate
gulped down angry -
have apple, Doc
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the first cool breath
of Fall’s brisk leaves -
a ball, raking
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sex symbol ruse
pol’tic’s rude lies
eyes rent go blind
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li’l pinking rose
lips inked red, hushed
by roar of falls
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