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In Greek Mythology, Thanatos represents death. In psychoanalysis, a person’s urge toward death or self-harm—Random Word    *

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Thanatos Cold Embrace Of Death

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Everyone grieves in their own way ~ time will only tell if healing comes,   *           for some, deaths blanket; unbearable and Thanatos is nearby —poetess
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Despair? so be it. *
If else, is there? how does one bear   *
the cold loss, dooming despair
sadness deepens * when            *
first breath taken, Reaped, listlessness creeps *
Lethargic fate what does it rate on a splinting scale? 
Repress with a paralyzing scalpel  *
severing deaths pathway to a pining lobe 
Incase powerless, * with a lack, 
while lactating breasts bleed tears
Depress with Thanatos’s betrayal         *
As nipples * drip with nourishment in a holy grail *
wetted reminders that youth itself hold no leniency 
The warm blanket of death betrays
a death wish, ineffectual this death drive strays
a young mother’s dreams vanish *
in thin air, * one too frail, grows pail
numbness, quietness, * and repetition,
The warm blanket of death betrays
Yet she is not * alone, but lonely
They watch the despair she holds
These spirits, soulful * a family's 
surrounding  * with love’s repair 
*carrying * the warmth that fans
of a love true *  God's plan 
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Rose  Avatar
April 12, 2025 at 6:42 PM
Gods plan is always that we hold fast to him, and never despair. thankyou for such a lovely heart felt poem today dear Anaya
Anaya Avatar
April 13, 2025 at 11:28 AM
Greiving and broken-hearted, but not in despair as Jesus abides, beautiful, Mystic Rose. It reminds me of The Bleeding-Heart representing Mother Mary's grief for her son. Happy Palm Sunday ~ Anaya
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April 12, 2025 at 3:58 PM
Such a magnificent poem, Anaya, that tackles the intricate emotions of despair, grieving, and the battle between life and death. It portrays a young mother's tremendous dismay, feeling isolated and forlorn, but concurrently conveying the existence of love and assistance from invisible beings.
Anaya Avatar
April 12, 2025 at 4:10 PM
...angles and family will help her mend after all it is God's plan. Las, if i may call Las nothing more devastating than losing a child, not that i know of.Ty for your kind words! xhugs
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