Than Bauk Poetry

TOO LITTLE

need end this verse
take the hearse ride...
life... terse when free.

PERILOUS JOURNEY

Lay down and rest
do not jest my
friend... test the way.

CLOUDY

Tender the night
the moon bright as
the sight of... leaves

© Harry J Horsman 2019
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Ball Avatar
March 14, 2019 at 5:22 PM
This is really hard for me. You seem to have nailed it though. Congrats my friend. God Bless, JB
Dietrich Avatar
March 7, 2019 at 6:53 PM
back with my congrats on this one, Harry. I finally did it and forgot to enter it into the contest. Talk about getting old!!
Lindley Avatar
March 3, 2019 at 4:45 PM
My great friend , your triple gems are truly awesome. I wrote one in this poetry form it seems about two years ago.Yours presents a tale the imagination must fill in! A fav.. a great vision cast..
One Avatar
March 3, 2019 at 7:32 AM
You did this very well..
Allison Avatar
February 13, 2019 at 3:06 PM
a fabulous triple whammy of poems Harry, many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
Salehi Avatar
February 13, 2019 at 1:49 AM
Congratulations.
Y. Avatar
February 11, 2019 at 11:38 AM
Hi Harry, I enjoyed your Trio Than- Bauk's . Congratulations on a well deserved win:-) Alexis
Gorelick Avatar
February 11, 2019 at 10:14 AM
These are nice! I especially like the third one. congrats! BG
Devonshire Avatar
February 11, 2019 at 5:46 AM
Harry, just stopping back with congratulations on your well-deserved first place in the contest! Hugs, Carolyn
Messina Avatar
February 10, 2019 at 9:46 PM
I loved this trio of witty poems Harry. Well done my friend. Congratulations on your 1st place win...Charlie
Devonshire Avatar
February 10, 2019 at 5:09 PM
Hope you have some new poetry soon, Harry. Thanks for the visit to my page. Hugs, Carolyn
Godwin Avatar
February 3, 2019 at 3:38 PM
Great job, much substance despite form restrictions abounds in each stanza. Clapping for you. Poetry hugs ... CayCay
One Avatar
February 3, 2019 at 1:15 PM
You did this really well Harry..
Rodrigues Avatar
February 1, 2019 at 10:24 PM
I like The Perilous Journey! Beat wishes in contest!
Smith Avatar
January 31, 2019 at 11:38 AM
Interesting form, one that is foreign to me, but most enjoyable...
Devonshire Avatar
January 30, 2019 at 5:22 PM
Three fabulous Than Bauk poems, Harry! Winning wishes coming your way. Hugs, Carolyn
Trifiatis Avatar
January 30, 2019 at 9:56 AM
Pearls of poetic rapture dear, harry! Good luck my friend!
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January 29, 2019 at 7:04 PM
I agree with Andrea, the last stanza also my favorite, best of luck in the contest!
Vaso Avatar
January 29, 2019 at 6:56 PM
I do not know this form, but I loved the poem!
Dietrich Avatar
January 29, 2019 at 3:20 PM
Was more than one permitted?Gosh, I had problems coming up with just one. I enjoyed this set. My favorite was the last one, so succinct but still with imagery.
Devonshire Avatar
January 30, 2019 at 5:23 PM
I think he said up to three. Harry's on a roll here...
Horne Avatar
January 29, 2019 at 3:11 PM
love this, my friend - I always find this form very difficult & you've done a great job
Callus Avatar
January 29, 2019 at 11:06 AM
You do have a way with words, Harry! Enjoyed all three. Best regards // paul
Onclaud Avatar
January 29, 2019 at 10:17 AM
wow, a triple treat so well quilled, harry... i like them all!...spill ink!...hugggs
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