Tgif - the First Time

Half-drowned from another cloudburst
His life seemed to be at its worst
He opened his eyes
And with great surprise
Robinson Crusoe said it first!

*TGIF=Thank God its Friday
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Laurie Avatar
September 11, 2020 at 6:26 PM
G’day Rico … I think that statement and R.C. both got it right. A great play on words again Rico - witty indeed - Lindsay
Leffanta Avatar
September 12, 2020 at 9:31 AM
Not compared to what YOU write! Aloha! Rico
Bauer Avatar
September 11, 2020 at 5:06 PM
this is hilarious, rico! thanks for the grin...
Leffanta Avatar
September 12, 2020 at 9:30 AM
Thank you, Ilene. I'll try for a laugh tomorrow! Aloha! Rico
Allison Avatar
September 11, 2020 at 2:33 PM
love the word play Rico!:-) hugs Jan xx
Leffanta Avatar
September 12, 2020 at 9:30 AM
Thank you for reading and commenting, Jan! Aloha! Rico
Devonshire Avatar
September 11, 2020 at 11:44 AM
Robinson Crusoe certainly knew how to face adversity, Rico. Ironically, today is the 19th anniversary of the World Trade Center disaster. It was a time when many questioned their faith. Very well penned, Rico! Best wishes, Carolyn
Leffanta Avatar
September 11, 2020 at 12:02 PM
Aye, but would he have survived without Friday? Aloha! Rico
White Avatar
September 11, 2020 at 11:32 AM
Lol. One day he’ll find it first Rico, kelli
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