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Tgif---Thank God It's Friday

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ur brgr pak s in d  ref.

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I’m hitting the breeze, painting the town red
fine leather and stockings dressed
with rockin’ gal friends in tow


The car scoots on Friday night’s bar near west
dance steps, cocktails whirl jazz lights…
while you’re TV couching

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*Hey, got the car keys… I’m meeting up with the crew
this Friday night… your burger pack is in the ref.


Text Talk Contest of David Williams

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Kash Poet

Date: 9/27/2012 5:58:00 AM

She told two short lines 1st and 2nd...you can have longer 3rd and 4 th lines.

Gwendolen Song

Date: 9/10/2012 4:08:00 PM

Nette! Aloha! Why is it that I never get texts like these?..How inviting to spend an evening on the town with you! Gotta love the ending...it's like sayin'--I'm outta here! Go cook your own suppa!! hahaha Enjoyed this one a ton!! :) gwendolen

John Boak

Date: 9/10/2012 10:58:00 AM

you are from the text capital of the world aren't you?...lol good piece for a contest...i as expecting another congrats on the comments....i think this should be, or should have been ( am not sure when this contest was held since i haven't gone online for a long period of time) a winner. so congrats for this lovely witty piece.

Kash Poet

Date: 8/26/2012 12:26:00 PM

Wow Nette Love this witty text!Very good entry for the contest.Best wishes to you.

Delysia Hendricks

Date: 8/25/2012 10:43:00 PM

lol. You sure know your text talk. Well done, Nette. Good luck in the contest with this lil' gem. :)

Good Night

Date: 8/25/2012 4:56:00 AM

i like it good poem for the contest

Jack Horne

Date: 8/24/2012 2:43:00 PM

Love this fun write, Nette - boy, if anyone sent me a text message like that I would spend all Friday night deciphering it, lol

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 8/24/2012 12:07:00 PM

........Yes, thank God it`s Friday........ - Luck in contest Nette. - Take care - love // Anne-Lise :)

Russell Sivey

Date: 8/24/2012 11:44:00 AM

What an extraordinary and special write my friend! I just LOVE Fridays as well! Its time to have some fun, right Nette? My wife and I still have some good times left within us! I still can party with the best of them on Friday nights! Then I'm home around midnight dead tired wanting sleep...just kidding, kinda! This is a phenomenal poem, I really love this write...Great Work!!

Bl Devnath

Date: 8/24/2012 11:44:00 AM

Hi! friend, it's wonderful. Good luck in the contest. Loved always, bl

Wilma Neels

Date: 8/24/2012 11:40:00 AM

Hey Nette, your title got me nodding my head in agreement ;) enjoyed this one, wishing you the best for David's contest.. Have an awesome weekend! *hugs*

Daver Austin

Date: 8/24/2012 10:18:00 AM

This was aimed directly at me, dear nette - old daver, couching. Except, I use a lazy boy. In my dreams, I'd love to join you ladies at the bar. Supersensationalexpialodcious. Love, daver