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Andaree
Created by Andrea Dietrich with a rhyming scheme AaBbCbcbbaA.  The first line and the last line are both the same 11- syllable line. This form decreases in line length with each line getting progressively smaller by 2 syllables until reaching the one-syllable word in the middle  of the poem. Then each of the lines increase progressively by 2 syllables until the final line of eleven syllables is met:  (11/9/7/5/3/1/3/5/7/9/11).  The middle word should be a word very important to the theme. It appears somewhere in the title or can be the title itself and that middle word also rhymes with lines 3 4  8 and 9. Centering the poem is also recommended for an hourglass effect!

If you should notice any spelling or grammatical errors...PLEASE...point them out to me, as I am compiling these poems for my new book. Thank you, Emile.

The moon slowly ascends like a regal Queen while skittish shadows all flee the scene and scarlet skies bleed last light as nippy winds bite tethered to night drops of dew soon start to alight thirsty mosquitoes take flight and where beauty and silence careen the moon slowly ascends like a regal Queen. (Andaree) Sept. 25, 2018

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Date: 11/22/2018 9:57:00 AM
AWESOME! A great example! Thank you. (Per your suggestion, here's something I just noticed. Line 9 appears to have 1 too many syllables).
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Emile Pinet
Date: 11/22/2018 10:18:00 AM
Thank you Michael for bringing this to my attention, you are right my friend, I have corrected it, Emile.
Date: 11/19/2018 2:11:00 PM
This is so beautiful, Emile.
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Date: 11/19/2018 2:55:00 PM
Thank you so much Carole, your comments are always welcome my friend, Emile.
Date: 10/22/2018 9:11:00 AM
Emile, love the poem and a wonderful example for the contest !
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Emile Pinet
Date: 10/22/2018 7:01:00 PM
Thanks Constance, I look forward to reading your entry my friend, Emile.
Date: 10/22/2018 6:30:00 AM
A wonderful poem, Emile, great form used too:)
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Emile Pinet
Date: 10/22/2018 8:42:00 AM
Thank you Jo, I appreciate your support my friend, Emile.
Date: 10/21/2018 7:00:00 PM
Excellent Andaree, Emile. I like this poem....great first and last line. SuZ
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Emile Pinet
Date: 10/21/2018 8:48:00 PM
Thank you Suzanne, I appreciate your support my friend, Emile.
Date: 10/6/2018 8:49:00 PM
Lovely, Emile. Well penned.
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Emile Pinet
Date: 10/7/2018 9:45:00 AM
Thanks Line, I appreciate your support my friend, Emile.
Date: 9/26/2018 8:53:00 AM
Beautiful! This is peaceful. :)
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Emile Pinet
Date: 9/26/2018 12:29:00 PM
Thank you Heidi, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.

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