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Tethered To Night

The moon slowly ascends like a regal Queen while skittish shadows all flee the scene and scarlet skies bleed last light as nippy winds bite tethered to night drops of dew soon start to alight thirsty mosquitoes take flight and where beauty and silence careen the moon slowly ascends like a regal Queen.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Wegman Avatar
November 22, 2018 at 9:57 AM
AWESOME! A great example! Thank you. (Per your suggestion, here's something I just noticed. Line 9 appears to have 1 too many syllables).
Pinet Avatar
November 22, 2018 at 10:18 AM
Thank you Michael for bringing this to my attention, you are right my friend, I have corrected it, Emile.
Duet Avatar
November 19, 2018 at 2:11 PM
This is so beautiful, Emile.
Pinet Avatar
November 19, 2018 at 2:55 PM
Thank you so much Carole, your comments are always welcome my friend, Emile.
La France Avatar
October 22, 2018 at 9:11 AM
Emile, love the poem and a wonderful example for the contest !
Pinet Avatar
October 22, 2018 at 7:01 PM
Thanks Constance, I look forward to reading your entry my friend, Emile.
Daniel Avatar
October 22, 2018 at 6:30 AM
A wonderful poem, Emile, great form used too:)
Pinet Avatar
October 22, 2018 at 8:42 AM
Thank you Jo, I appreciate your support my friend, Emile.
Delaney Avatar
October 21, 2018 at 7:00 PM
Excellent Andaree, Emile. I like this poem....great first and last line. SuZ
Pinet Avatar
October 21, 2018 at 8:48 PM
Thank you Suzanne, I appreciate your support my friend, Emile.
Gauthier Avatar
October 6, 2018 at 8:49 PM
Lovely, Emile. Well penned.
Pinet Avatar
October 7, 2018 at 9:45 AM
Thanks Line, I appreciate your support my friend, Emile.
Sands Avatar
September 26, 2018 at 8:53 AM
Beautiful! This is peaceful. :)
Pinet Avatar
September 26, 2018 at 12:29 PM
Thank you Heidi, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.
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