Test of Time

Secrets blowing in the wind Another gift, another lift Words whispered from the soul Echoing in the chamber of my heart Looking ahead to the dreams we'll have It's what we believe in No turning back Chosen ----- Frozen Lost in love Lost in life Wiping away all the tears Soothing all our fears Together our friendship will survive the test of time Repost-11/12/2014 Write Me A Happy Contest

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Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 8/2/2015 11:05:00 PM

Superb write Tim that's worthy of great win! Big congrats!

Kp Nunez

Date: 8/2/2015 7:41:00 PM

I am drawn to this piece, Tim. Seemingly simple but profound in its meaning for anyone who cares to look into one's take on real friendships. 7. Congrats on your great win!

Skat A

Date: 8/2/2015 4:13:00 PM

Tim, a wonderful win. SKAT

Jan Allison

Date: 8/2/2015 7:48:00 AM

Dropping back with my congrats Tim:-) hugs jan xx

Afolabi Muideen

Date: 8/1/2015 6:51:00 PM

I love your write, you penned it wisely and brilliant.....good luck in the contest.........A.M.

Nette Onclaud

Date: 8/1/2015 1:20:00 PM

redeeming the joy one deserves, tim... greeat piece.. huggs

Carol Eastman

Date: 8/1/2015 10:14:00 AM

Yep! Tha's Dragon and me... Ane Hubby makes three... We play thru the days... As with friends we do play... And we seek others in our spree.

Constance La France

Date: 8/1/2015 10:10:00 AM

Tim, whispering and echoing beauty in each lovely word 7 and thanks for visiting my poetry

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 8/1/2015 8:16:00 AM

This definitely uplifts my spirits.Yes ,true friendship will survive and it never felt better to be frozen in life...cuz life is beautiful ..who ever wants to loose it ? A positive and hopeful poem Tim makes me wanna go out and breathe some fresh air...Lovely.

Tim Smith
Date: 8/1/2015 8:37:00 AM

I am blessed to have some amazing friends.... I'm going out to a BBQ.....stop on by....you are welcome to attend...hugs

Arthur Vaso

Date: 8/1/2015 12:18:00 AM

Did you write for Air Supply? Loved this!

Tim Smith
Date: 8/1/2015 8:36:00 AM

They looking for writers?... I know a few that would work for royalties

Jan Allison

Date: 7/31/2015 7:56:00 PM

beautiful imagery Tim this is a lovely uplifting write - good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx

Tim Smith
Date: 7/31/2015 7:59:00 PM

Thanks Jan. It is reflective of my mood today.