Tim Smith Poet Free verse

Test of Time

Secrets blowing in the wind

Another gift, another lift

Words whispered from the soul

Echoing in the chamber of my heart

Looking ahead to the dreams we'll have

It's what we believe in

No turning back

Chosen ----- Frozen

Lost in love

Lost in life

Wiping away all the tears

Soothing all our fears

Together our friendship

will survive the test of time



Repost-11/12/2014
Write Me A Happy Contest

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Dr. Upma A. Sharma August 2, 2015 at 11:05 PM Superb write Tim that's worthy of great win! Big congrats!

Kp Nunez August 2, 2015 at 7:41 PM I am drawn to this piece, Tim. Seemingly simple but profound in its meaning for anyone who cares to look into one's take on real friendships. 7. Congrats on your great win!

Skat A August 2, 2015 at 4:13 PM Tim, a wonderful win. SKAT

Jan Allison August 2, 2015 at 7:48 AM Dropping back with my congrats Tim:-) hugs jan xx

Afolabi Muideen August 1, 2015 at 6:51 PM I love your write, you penned it wisely and brilliant.....good luck in the contest.........A.M.

Nette Onclaud August 1, 2015 at 1:20 PM redeeming the joy one deserves, tim... greeat piece.. huggs

Carol Eastman August 1, 2015 at 10:14 AM Yep! Tha's Dragon and me... Ane Hubby makes three... We play thru the days... As with friends we do play... And we seek others in our spree.

Constance La France August 1, 2015 at 10:10 AM Tim, whispering and echoing beauty in each lovely word 7 and thanks for visiting my poetry

Charmaine Chircop August 1, 2015 at 8:16 AM This definitely uplifts my spirits.Yes ,true friendship will survive and it never felt better to be frozen in life...cuz life is beautiful ..who ever wants to loose it ? A positive and hopeful poem Tim makes me wanna go out and breathe some fresh air...Lovely. Tim Smith August 1, 2015 at 8:37 AM I am blessed to have some amazing friends.... I'm going out to a BBQ.....stop on by....you are welcome to attend...hugs

Arthur Vaso August 1, 2015 at 12:18 AM Did you write for Air Supply? Loved this! Tim Smith August 1, 2015 at 8:36 AM They looking for writers?... I know a few that would work for royalties

Jan Allison July 31, 2015 at 7:56 PM beautiful imagery Tim this is a lovely uplifting write - good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx Tim Smith July 31, 2015 at 7:59 PM Thanks Jan. It is reflective of my mood today.