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Terzanelle

Triplets five, one quatrain, Together, nineteen lines, twined interweavingly, thus repeating lines; rhymed tactfully, precisely, The rhyme scheme's like a chain; Tough to compose, but fun. 01.20.2022
syllables checked with howmanysyllables.com For Joseph May's "Write about a Form" contest

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Date: 2/25/2022 1:36:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. A creative write. Now we know about the "Terzanelle." Have a great/blessed day and weekend...............
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Date: 2/20/2022 3:40:00 AM
Great on Terzanelle, a form I did not know but now know. Congratulations!
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Date: 2/19/2022 5:08:00 PM
Jo, this is excellent. CONGRATS! Janice
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Date: 2/19/2022 5:03:00 PM
I am so happy to see you win first place with this entry Jo. Very impressive! Congratulations on your wonderful win my friend. Blessings xxoo
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Date: 2/19/2022 3:36:00 PM
Wonderful write Jo, Congrats on your win
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Date: 1/22/2022 3:47:00 PM
Those repeating lines are killer Jo. You did so well at describing this challenging form. I have only written one in the 10 years I have been here called Angels. It was so difficult that I never wrote another. Are you fond of this form? I hope this poem is a winner for you my friend. Blessings xxoo
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Date: 1/20/2022 5:30:00 PM
Nice job on the constraints within the pleiades format and instructional about the lovely Terzanelle form. I love the line "twined interweavingly"... makes me think of braided hair. Blessings on your day, my friend. Please keep writing ~ John
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Date: 1/20/2022 9:10:00 AM
Very well done. I don't think I ever tried this form. Best for a win.
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Date: 1/20/2022 7:44:00 AM
Ah, your too smart for me lol, nice form xo
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Date: 1/20/2022 5:36:00 AM
A Pleiades on a terzanelle. Cleverly written, Jo.
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