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Terrace of Crops

Terrace of crops

Down under the sky
Down under the terrace
Terrace of neighbour
Terrace garden
Garden of Eden
Garden of tulips
Tulips for bouquet
Tulips for wedding
Wedding so opulent
Wedding is bliss
Bliss of union
Bliss for life
Life is wonderful
Life is short
Short film
Short dress
Dress of satin
Dress of queen
Queen of music
Queen of palace
Palace of pearls
Palace so royal
Royal cuisine
Royal chariot
Chariot of horses
Chariot of love
Love is eternal
Love is sweet
Sweet children
Sweet smile
Smile of content
Smile so cute
Cute teddy bear
Cute little face
Face the challenge
Face the race
Race of cars
Race of power
Power of friendship
Power of words
Words of sympathy
Words of relief
Relief from cold
Relief from rains
Rains of blessings
Rains for crops
Crops of glory
Crops plenty
Plenty....
Glory!

©Anulaxmi Nayak,2015


For contest:Down under
sponsored by: Debbie Guzzi
date:4th September 2015

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 9/12/2015 8:19:00 AM

Awesome work !! No wonder it is in the winners’ list. Congrats..Sara

Anu Nayak
Date: 9/12/2015 9:48:00 AM

Dear Sara, i appreciate your words and visit ...means a lot to me...thank you so much...loads of love, Anu:-)

Kim Merryman

Date: 9/8/2015 8:55:00 PM

Great job on this tricky form, Anulaxmi! Congrats on your win! Love, Kim

Anu Nayak
Date: 9/8/2015 10:20:00 PM

Dear Kim, I appreciate your visits and words and wishes......thank you so very much dear:-)....love, Anu:-)

Skat A

Date: 9/8/2015 9:02:00 AM

Anulaxmi, Congratulations on your -Down Under- win. Love .....SKAT**

Anu Nayak
Date: 9/8/2015 9:05:00 AM

Thank you so very much dear Skat:-)love, Anu:-)

Eve Roper

Date: 9/7/2015 6:57:00 PM

Fabulous write,Anulaxmi , congratulations on your win a 7! Hugs Eve

Anu Nayak
Date: 9/7/2015 10:44:00 PM

Dear Eve, I appreciate your visit, words, wishes and 7....you are very generous to me....thank you dear....love, Anu:-)

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 9/7/2015 4:10:00 PM

You learned this new form so quick! A very sweet verse I did enjoy. Congrad's! Light & Love

Anu Nayak
Date: 9/7/2015 10:41:00 PM

Dear Debbie Guzzi, I am extremely happy and feel honoured...thank you very much ....your words keep me motivated further to write and try new styles of poetry....thanks again, loads of love, Anu:-)

Anindya Mohan Tagore

Date: 9/7/2015 5:11:00 AM

This is a difficult form of poetry and you have written it nicely... Congrats on your Win...Hugs, Bobby

Anu Nayak
Date: 9/7/2015 5:18:00 AM

Dear Bobby, thank you so much for your visit and your words and i appreciate that...this is my first blitz:) ....my heartfelt thanks once again........love, ANU:)

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 9/6/2015 11:40:00 PM

Superb winning write Anulaxmi, big congrats!

Anu Nayak
Date: 9/7/2015 5:14:00 AM

DEAR Dr. Upma, thank you so very much for your visit and wishes ......loads of love, Anu:)

Eileen Manassian

Date: 9/3/2015 4:10:00 PM

Great blitz, my dear. Not an easy form, but You made it shine. Hugs

Anu Nayak
Date: 9/3/2015 11:47:00 PM

Dear Eileen, I thank you and appreciate your visit dear....your avatar is fabulous:-) first blitz of life....tried for contest ...thanks again dear friend...love, Anu:-)