Terra Firma

(a time piece in space)

behind yonder face
the fat queen lays indolent
subjects scurry blind
a hive of activity
driving each day into night.

© Harry J Horsman 2017
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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DiMino Avatar
February 27, 2018 at 5:36 AM
We all serve the fat queen, and the fat king; the secret, as you say, is the blind scurry--not to over-think some things. Time and space are lost in the activity, even if it is just maintenance of a sort. That's why health spas are everywhere. Great read, Harry!
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February 12, 2018 at 12:49 AM
Nicely done, Harry; amazing how creatures so small seem to have capacity for thought so large and complex as a hive.
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February 1, 2018 at 11:57 AM
Great feel! Totally original! Great poet!
Dietrich Avatar
December 20, 2017 at 1:39 PM
In space, huh? I was thinking of a recent movie I saw on some old history of Queen Victoria and a subject Abdul who she grew fond of. I sure enjoyed this!
Callus Avatar
December 19, 2017 at 12:12 PM
I would say a hive of creativity and ripe imagination, Harry! Well done! Regards // paul
Williams Avatar
December 19, 2017 at 1:33 AM
You are on a roll, another wonderful Tanka....Maria
Pandit Avatar
December 18, 2017 at 1:31 PM
Another lovely depiction--love the choice of precious words.
Thomas Avatar
December 18, 2017 at 1:15 PM
Right unto death. Enjoyed this Harry.
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