Charlie Knowlton Poet Concrete

Tequila Sunrise

The
                                   sun today rose like
                                      a slice of lemon 
                                       that grips the
                                        salty edge of
                                         an ice cold
                                          margarita
                                             badly
                                                i
                                                n
                          
                                                n
                                                e
                                                e
                                                d
                                              of an
                                        extra shot of
                                    tequila for warmth

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Darlene De Beaulieu April 1, 2019 at 2:00 PM Hello Charlie Knowlton, may i try a glass please? Have a nice day my friend. Darlene De Beaulieu April 2, 2019 at 5:52 PM I will have one without salt. please. thank you Have a nice evening my friend. Charlie Knowlton April 1, 2019 at 10:34 PM With or without salt Darlene? Thank you for reading and responding.

Pat Adams March 15, 2019 at 5:22 PM This is amazing Charlie. I will checking out your work from time to time for sure. Another FAV for me. Well done!... Pat Charlie Knowlton March 15, 2019 at 8:11 PM Thanks again Pat…Appreciate you taking the time to read and respond.

Line Gauthier February 27, 2019 at 9:23 AM Thanks for the lovely cheerful delightful poem this morning, Charlie. Charlie Knowlton February 27, 2019 at 9:51 AM I believe Montreal is sharing that same drink today. Charlie Knowlton February 27, 2019 at 9:49 AM Thanks Line…That one just came to and fortunately the letters fit. Here`s to you for all your support.

Caren Krutsinger February 27, 2019 at 8:41 AM Wonderfully done, Charlie. Looks like a slice of lemon is on the edge. Charlie Knowlton February 27, 2019 at 8:45 AM Thank you Caren. Sometimes they just come to you. I appreciate your reading, liking, and response.