Notes About The Poem

Dearest Peter,

Sense you are my nature mountain man, and you also enjoy history, I'm glad Tom randomly

Choose this one for you. I'm a child of the lake, and water has always been a big part of my

World, but I think with the fact we both love history, this is a nice blending of the everything

For both of us my dear friend. Peter it means alot to me that you will enjoy this write, because

Your like my Austrian concious if I go to far you tell me. Or if something can be better I know

You'll be honest and tell me. This is for you my friend, let me know if you like it, cheri

Tentacles

In the heart of the blackest abyss, down, 
Down, in fathoms deep crypt, where light
Does not penetrate, and the structured protective hauls,
Of men, are crushed beneath pressures massive
Weight, of the oceans deepest depth.
This is truly inner spaces aquatic zone of the
Unknown, a realm of stilled silence frozen
In the icy currents of the barren straights.
Where prehistoric giants dwell, amongst the
Tidal flow, ambush predators, forgotten beasts,
From long ago, living krakens whom devour
All life, hidden within their dark domain.
In Poseidon's mighty anger, the waves answer,
To his fists of fury, hurricanes wrath of vengeance,
Gives birth to the perfect storms rage, 
Vessels rise and than fall in the tidal surging
Waters.
Nay do the sailors cry out to the Lord God on high, 
For redemption's salvation, but the sacrificial altars must
Be appeased, by flesh and bloods sacred offerings.
Summons does the mighty lord of the seven seas,
To release the last of the ancient Leviathans.
Two thousand hands, of a thousand dead men,
Heave and pull at the tethering heavy chains,
To this devil of the depths cage.
From within interments vaulted keep,
Captivities living spawn from hell, is 
Unshackled and released, to reek havocs
Devastation above.
An aquatic spider, a maritime widow maker,
Flexing and in-flexing, its body’s motions,
Towards the surface, in pulsations rhythmic
Orchestrations, the gray giant is ready to strike,
With its killing arms extended wide, to grapple
At its unprotected prey, to engorge itself with
All living matter that it surveys, within its icy reach.
As bubbles shoot upwards breaking the waters
Surface, suction cups and talon claws are drawn
Outwards, aligning his eight legged tentacles of bone
Crushing death, behold the Giant Squid, instrument of
Lethal torture, a living killing machine from the fathoms 
Deepest depths.
For it is the beast, the true essence of evil
Incarnate, and none survive its destructive wrath.

BY: CHERYL ANNA DUNN

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014



Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 10/18/2014 10:32:00 PM
This is majestic and beautiful, an epic write if there ever was one, I am so sorry to take so long to read it, I haven't been around as much these days, but I promise to you and all to get around to reading all your lovely poems!!!!! Hugs
Login to Reply
Date: 10/14/2014 7:32:00 AM
To me this is an epic write. You do this si very well and I enjoyed reading every word of it!!! A solid 7 I give it my friend!
Login to Reply
Date: 10/12/2014 8:37:00 PM
Wow Cheryl, this blew me away, as soon as Peter comes back from his walk I will put him on to this, I am sure he would like to thank Tom himself, I used to love watching monster and vampire movies but I think I am over all that now, did you ever see the movie called "The creature from the black lagoon", this reminds me of it......Take care my friend............Vera............
Login to Reply
Date: 10/12/2014 8:32:00 PM
wow, that is quite a scary creature from the depths of the sea. You are so good at bringing your creatures to life, Cherl. And your poetry shows that you are very well educated in the details of legends and lore! Nicely done.
Login to Reply
Date: 10/12/2014 8:29:00 PM
/So you live on Utah Street, huh? I used to live on Iowa Avenue and that was when I used to live in Iowa. ahha. I miss my homestate!! Now to read your poem!!
Login to Reply
Date: 10/12/2014 8:01:00 PM
How wonderful a free verse of the Giant Squid ;) eve
Login to Reply
Date: 10/12/2014 5:29:00 PM
Dear Cheryl, WOWWWW ! How cool it is to meet someone who is interested in these maritime beasts. Like you, I believe there are many creatures yet undiscovered that have remained in the depths of such places as the Mariana Trench. Brilliantly written!!!! Really an awesome write. Love, Carolyn (If it's for Deb's contest, she'll love it too.)
Login to Reply
Date: 10/12/2014 12:44:00 PM
You can work the words that build epic stories---This Is Great
Login to Reply
Date: 10/12/2014 11:00:00 AM
I'll keep this one in mind Cheri next time I go swimming, particularly in the ocean. Another super job here!! The imagery and the calibrated diction of this poem are indeed quite vivid and powerful, and keeps the reader's attention on the story line as it is built out. A "7" and a FAV from me!! Cheers, Gary
Login to Reply
Get a Premium Membership
Get more exposure for your poetry and more features with a Premium Membership.
Book: Reflection on the Important Things

Member Area

My Admin
Profile and Settings
Edit My Poems
Edit My Quotes
Edit My Short Stories
Edit My Articles
My Comments Inboxes
My Comments Outboxes
Soup Mail
Poetry Contests
Contest Results/Status
Followers
Poems of Poets I Follow
Friend Builder

Soup Social

Poetry Forum
New/Upcoming Features
The Wall
Soup Facebook Page
Who is Online
Link to Us

Member Poems

Poems - Top 100 New
Poems - Top 100 All-Time
Poems - Best
Poems - by Topic
Poems - New (All)
Poems - New (PM)
Poems - New by Poet
Poems - Read
Poems - Unread

Member Poets

Poets - Best New
Poets - New
Poets - Top 100 Most Poems
Poets - Top 100 Most Poems Recent
Poets - Top 100 Community
Poets - Top 100 Contest

Famous Poems

Famous Poems - African American
Famous Poems - Best
Famous Poems - Classical
Famous Poems - English
Famous Poems - Haiku
Famous Poems - Love
Famous Poems - Short
Famous Poems - Top 100

Famous Poets

Famous Poets - Living
Famous Poets - Most Popular
Famous Poets - Top 100
Famous Poets - Best
Famous Poets - Women
Famous Poets - African American
Famous Poets - Beat
Famous Poets - Cinquain
Famous Poets - Classical
Famous Poets - English
Famous Poets - Haiku
Famous Poets - Hindi
Famous Poets - Jewish
Famous Poets - Love
Famous Poets - Metaphysical
Famous Poets - Modern
Famous Poets - Punjabi
Famous Poets - Romantic
Famous Poets - Spanish
Famous Poets - Suicidal
Famous Poets - Urdu
Famous Poets - War

Poetry Resources

Anagrams
Bible
Book Store
Character Counter
Cliché Finder
Poetry Clichés
Common Words
Copyright Information
Grammar
Grammar Checker
Homonym
Homophones
How to Write a Poem
Lyrics
Love Poem Generator
New Poetic Forms
Plagiarism Checker
Poetry Art
Publishing
Random Word Generator
Spell Checker
Store
What is Good Poetry?
Word Counter