Tension In Sight

Electricity Tension overspill weathered Sparks chain lightening http://www.thehighlanderspoems.com/nature-8.php

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Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 9/26/2010 8:59:00 AM

This could be said of society and life in general as well as nature, James. Electrifying real! Love, Carolyn

Wilma Neels

Date: 9/25/2010 1:36:00 PM

Great imagery and twist wrt your other write James. Your flexibility has no bounds ;) my weekend has been a weird one here. Hope yours has been awesome (",)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/24/2010 8:14:00 PM

Way to make a haiku from the same topic as other poem (with twist to the final word in the title!)

John Freeman

Date: 9/24/2010 7:33:00 PM

I thought of this James! Bite and devour, will surely cause a scar, tentions released, will surely cause a stench! If you're here to pinch, you're the stench. what do you think? Thanks for your comments. Agape, Moses

Joyce Johnson

Date: 9/24/2010 6:21:00 PM

Very clever and how different from "Tenision on Site. Love, Joyce