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Tension In Sight


Electricity
Tension overspill weathered
Sparks chain lightening








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Carolyn Devonshire

September 26, 2010 at 8:59 AM

This could be said of society and life in general as well as nature, James. Electrifying real! Love, Carolyn

Wilma Neels

September 25, 2010 at 1:36 PM

Great imagery and twist wrt your other write James. Your flexibility has no bounds ;) my weekend has been a weird one here. Hope yours has been awesome (",)

Andrea Dietrich

September 24, 2010 at 8:14 PM

Way to make a haiku from the same topic as other poem (with twist to the final word in the title!)

John Freeman

September 24, 2010 at 7:33 PM

I thought of this James! Bite and devour, will surely cause a scar, tentions released, will surely cause a stench! If you're here to pinch, you're the stench. what do you think? Thanks for your comments. Agape, Moses