Tension

Gleaming caught in your eye tonight That subtle sexy smile Was it my womanly wiles Maybe all girls get that sight Lucky enough for you I saw A hidden passion within Some more than mortal men The lust there was so raw I know you have an image of me all A desire that's unfulfilled Wanting you to just pick me up And hold me to the wall To get this fire I will Enraptured, my body it must

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 8/9/2013 10:20:00 AM

a write full of passion, very much enjoyed this one, ~always, Linda

Andrea Travis
Date: 8/9/2013 2:13:00 PM

Thanks for your comment Linda! That makes my day! I hope I am getting better at the new forms I am experimenting with. I have been sruggling with villanelle and sonnet alike. Any input is greatly appreciated!