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Tension

Tension In the damp existence of my thoughts Bleeds through my sights that sear my dreams And is the decaying corps chained to my ankle That gasps for constant attention in gusts of norm Beats seizures into my motionless mortality. Tension Is my continuous companion Sinister and wicked, he eats at me Causing the smoke to rise above my face And conflict every moment, I carry with me his festering existence .

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 5/16/2011 10:50:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Paula's contest Gabrielle. Love,Carol
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Gabrielle Wolcott
Date: 5/16/2011 3:57:00 PM
Tack!(:
Date: 5/15/2011 7:48:00 AM
Congrats Gabrielle on your win in the contest.
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Gabrielle Wolcott
Date: 5/15/2011 8:28:00 AM
Thank you!(:
Date: 5/15/2011 7:18:00 AM
Congrats Gabrielle on your HM in Paula's contest with this wonderful write ..enjoy your special honor with luv...
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Gabrielle Wolcott
Date: 5/15/2011 8:27:00 AM
Thanks! This is very exciting. :)
Date: 5/14/2011 11:52:00 PM
Congrats to you lovely Souper x
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Gabrielle Wolcott
Date: 5/15/2011 8:27:00 AM
Why thank you very much. :)
Date: 5/14/2011 10:52:00 PM
yes, the pressure... well executed with my best cheers to you, cyndi... :) huggs
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Date: 5/14/2011 10:52:00 PM
sorry.. gabrielle it is..:)
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Gabrielle Wolcott
Date: 5/14/2011 10:57:00 PM
Thank you very much! This was the first contest I entered here!(:
Date: 5/14/2011 9:33:00 PM
Very nice. Congrats
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Gabrielle Wolcott
Date: 5/14/2011 10:32:00 PM
Thank you. (:
Date: 5/13/2011 4:29:00 PM
wonderful poem and nice reading, thanks for sharing.
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Gabrielle Wolcott
Date: 5/13/2011 4:31:00 PM
Thanks for commenting. (:
Date: 5/13/2011 4:23:00 PM
Gabby, you are rather lost in the state of exhibiting fierceness... not in a bad way... but ones tenisions is better than being a "limp noodle", great poem to model all the tightness of ones tension mind... enjoyed,..p.d.
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Gabrielle Wolcott
Date: 5/13/2011 4:31:00 PM
I'm very lost. I know it, but this feelings allows my poetry to flow. <3 Thanks for the comment. (:

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