Tenebrous Train of Thought

From the eye there flows
The blood
The blood then forms
The crimson pool
From the pool there blossoms
The flower
The flower reflects
The glowing moon
From the moon there shines
The stars
The stars explode leaving
The dark
And then the night disperses
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Beesley Avatar
July 31, 2010 at 12:39 PM
excellent,like roses growing in concrete cities no love and no pity still they survive,thrive,and multiply
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