Tenebrous

Exceptionally tenebrous is this evening ceiling
One lit candle would be seen for miles appealing
That within the pitch-black, a snare is concealing
A minibeast with stinger at the caudal revealing
Bronze gazes could without effort hold anything
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024

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Hind Avatar
March 11, 2024 at 6:09 PM
Even though you have a stinger, you're tender? Is that it? Loved this
Scorpio Avatar
March 11, 2024 at 6:27 PM
Spot on assessment! I feel so put off most of the time...but every once in a while, someone gets me.... Heart felt regards A.S.
Romios Avatar
March 9, 2024 at 4:07 AM
Fab imagery in a morhyme, Enjoyed Pangie. Wishing you a happy Spring!
Scorpio Avatar
March 9, 2024 at 9:24 AM
PANGIE! So very good to hear from you. Happiest if spring time wishes to you as well my dear. Regards A.S.
Baker Avatar
March 1, 2024 at 9:11 PM
Nice Monorhyme, Anonomus. Have a great weekend, my friend. Bill
Scorpio Avatar
March 2, 2024 at 3:26 AM
Thank you Bill! As always it's good to hear from you! A.S.
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