Tenebrific Aura

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“Thought forms desire spawns are suspect Detached soul alone stands erect” - quote, by poet ________________________ Attachments compel stagnation Fears and desires then enmesh soul Illusion bondage delusion Heart cries out, to again feel whole Thoughts spiral in a narrow band Attachments compel stagnation Made thus captive by our own hand We crouch in fearful contraction Path to freedom is cessation Fearless spirit in witness stance Attachments compel stagnation Jubilant heart chooses to dance Our life, our choice, be to become Make then each breath celebration Joyous heart makes love feel welcome Attachments compel stagnation 08-November-2021 ''T'' Contest, New or Old Poetry Contest Sponsor: Constance La France

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Constance La France

Date: 11/11/2021 9:44:00 AM

Seeker, awesome writing and congratulations on your First Place win in my "T" Contest, I love your quote too ~ peace and tranquility _Constance

Unseeking Seeker
Date: 11/11/2021 9:46:00 AM

Thank you Constance! I’m happy to be given an opportunity to express my innermost thoughts for all to read :)

Christuraj Alex

Date: 11/10/2021 6:32:00 AM

Great work. Congratulations!

Unseeking Seeker
Date: 11/10/2021 7:02:00 AM

Thank you, Chris!

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 11/9/2021 8:04:00 AM

This last stanza was a gorgeous poem within a poem "Our life, our choice, be to become Make then each breath celebration Joyous heart makes love feel welcome Attachments compel stagnation" Wow!

Unseeking Seeker
Date: 11/9/2021 8:58:00 AM

Constance’s innovative contests offer an opportunity for us to express such ideas